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Spread Your Money Elsewhere!
on January 19, 2015
I only checked this out at the library because, I checked out the previous novel. Also, you can't guarantee that the novel will still be there. Unlike the previous novel, there were no moments where I liked this one.
I find it pretty funny how Shaded Moss describes the future warriors.
Some of the sentences that were supposed to be italicized weren't written in that way for the whole sentence. There were a few grammar mistakes. At one point in the book, Lightning Tail's just referred to as Lightning. Several parts of this novel makes absolutely no sense. The battle scene wasn't really interesting. Since the subtitle is The First Battle, they just had to add one more. While I found some character deaths useless, I didn't find any of them sad. Most of the characters were annoying. With how much of a jerk several ghost cats were, they should have been stood up to. I really hate how the kits were shielded from death. These are supposed to be kittens not children in fur suits!