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A wasted plot...
on August 15, 2012
I have just recently started reading this style of novel and have read some really great ones and I was so excited when I bought this one. However, I reached a point where I could barely read through this one. The story line has so much potential, the hero is great but the heroine!
The heroine is as thick as cold grits,childish, churlish,clumsy,petty, unfair.... to the point of being so annoying I couldn't stand her dialogue.
I wish someone else could use the exact same story line and put in a woman with a character I can admire.. some backbone and decency and the dialogue of a grown woman not some simpering dialogue that would annoy even a 12 year old.