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- Publisher: Gwalchmai Press; 1 edition (October 7, 2011)
- Publication Date: October 7, 2011
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- Language: English
- ASIN: B005TVVS2E
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Eventually he went to college, starting at Sam Houston State University, where his love of beer blossomed and his obsession with playing role-playing games led him to what he calls 'his best year ever' and what most of his family calls 'the lost year'.
Several years and a few crappy jobs later, he decided to pursue college again and was somehow accepted into the University of Houston Honors program (we won't get into the particulars of that miracle). This led to a degree in pharmacy and it followed from there that he wound up with a license to practice said profession.
Unfortunately, Michael was not a very good pharmacist. Being relatively lawless and free spirited were not particularly good traits to possess in a career focused on perfection, patient safety, and the letter-of-the-law. Nevertheless, he persisted and after a stint as a hospital pharmacy manager wound up as a pharmacist working in correctional managed care for the State of Texas.
He gave drugs to prisoners.
After a year or two at UTMB he became bored and taught himself entirely too much about networking, programming, and database design and administration. At first his supervisors warned him (repeatedly) to do his assigned tasks and stop designing programs to help his coworkers do theirs, but eventually they gave up and just let him do whatever he liked since it seemed to be generally working out well for them.
Ten or eleven years later and he got bored with that too. So he wrote a book. We won't talk about where he was when he wrote 'The Blacksmith's Son', but let's just assume he was probably supposed to be doing something else at the time.
Some people liked the book and told other people. Now they won't leave him alone.
After another year or two, he decided to just give up and stop pretending to be a pharmacist/programmer, much to the chagrin of his mother (who had only ever wanted him to grow up to be a doctor and had finally become content with the fact that he had settled on pharmacy instead).
Michael's wife supported his decision, even as she stubbornly refused to believe he would make any money at it. It turned out later that she was just telling him this because she knew that nothing made Michael more contrary than his never ending desire to prove her wrong. Once he was able to prove said fact she promptly admitted her tricky ruse and he has since given up on trying to win.
Today he lives at home with his stubborn wife, teenage twins, a giant moose-poodle, two yorkies, a green-cheeked conure, a massive prehistoric tortoise, and a head full of imaginary people. There are also some fish, but he refuses to talk about them.
Top Customer Reviews
I liked the plot; Mordecai, the protagonist, sole survivor of mage lineage and recently a Count, is forced to rapidly develop both his lordly and magical acumen to deal with the threat of an invading neighbor. Meanwhile, he has to deal with the voices he's started hearing, his tempestuous romance with Penny, and at night some demonic force has started moving. The "shining gods", the good gods (or so they claim) are also trying to gain Mort's loyalties, while Mort may well be turning into the first archmage in a millenium.
While there wasn't anything particularly inspired or new in Manning's first Mageborn book with respect to magical system, plot, or worldbuilding, this second novel introduces many more original nuances and shows Manning's development as an author. Overall, a solid effort and well worth the price, though it needs another run through for grammatical editing. I'd recommend this book to fantasy readers in general, will read the sequel, and fans of the first book will be pleased with the improvements.
My main qualm is with the character development: without giving too much away, I feel Mordecai's character dev in this installment is way off. While I understand him acting counter to his disposition in troubling times, I felt as though some of his choices and actions were too far removed from how you'd expect him to handle the situations. This left a sour taste at times, particularly when he seldom looked back reflectively on these jarring against-the-grain decisions.
Moreover, everything seems very haphazard and repetitive - character 1 is mad at character 2 for doing x... two chapters later: character 1 is mad at character 2 for doing a slight variation of x. I think the relationships and interactions need to be thought through more carefully such that they are more.. substantial.
Altogether I like what Manning is doing, I just feel as though he may be moving to quickly to get the books out, and the quality is suffering disproportionately as a result -> a little more time rereading and refining (and maybe planning), and this could have been a considerably better read. The first novel was so much more coherent and I simply hope that Manning can achieve that coherence in Book 3.
**SPOILER ALERT** SPOILERS: Characterizations and dialog are improved except when dealing with Mort's romantic relationship to Penny. Mort and Penny's relationship reads more like an adolescent soap opera than the deeper bonding relationship which is described. Also, Mort's ability to easily surpass generations of wizards because he avoided formal teaching is not very plausible. Mort is able in months to surpass generations of wizards in preparing for the climatic battle of the book. Mort rarely makes wizard mistakes (except the "I did not realize I was that powerful" type of mistakes). It would be nice to see a human fallibility on the magic skills.
The trilogy is charming. The writing shows steady improvement. I am looking forward to the final book in the trilogy.
SPOILERS...general theme, no specific details revealed.
This second book continues to follow our main hero, Mordecai (Mort). Initially his circumstances appear to have changed, and for the better...he is now Lord Cameron after he has inherited his parent's Estate. To his credit he is eager to devote time, energy and what little wealth he has, to improve his holdings and the lives of his tenants.
However, a new and powerful evil presence has returned to threaten the land and it appears our wizard Mort is the only one willing to take up the challenge to turn the hordes away before they can overrun the realm.
Impressions...a mix of Pros and Cons...
1,) this is fantasy-lite...featuring totally unbelievable situations that rely heavily on the abilities of a mage extraordinaire. Grand deeds of heroic daring-do. If Mort needed something to solve a problem, well he'll just come up with a solution and viola!...fixed via magic. Someone hurt? he'll heal them. Need explosives? he'll manufacture them from whatever is available. Need a bunch of wagons transported from here to there? just draw a magic circle and move them within it and poof, gone. Nothing, absolutely nothing is beyond Mort's abilities...making for a tale that will likely frustrate and/or annoy many hardcore fantasy fans.
2.) as another reviewer said of the first book...his extraordinary abilities seems to come at no cost...no extra work, no slave to studying books or the selling of one's soul...it's simply there at his beck and call...Read more ›
Most Recent Customer Reviews
Michael G. Manning does not disappoint in this follow up series as our protagonist continues to kick but.Published 23 days ago by wangchung
We couldn't wait to read book 2, and have already downloaded the 3rd! Some of the story could be expanded on, but it is a great read just as it is.Published 1 month ago by Rachel Roy
A good second book. Nothing too unpredictable but good writing and good characters. I am looking forward to book three.Published 3 months ago by Tom Skilton
Yeah,there's nothing like finding an author I like,whose already put out a lot of books. No waiting for the next one. Read morePublished 3 months ago by JOSEPH VANUCCHI
good book. good story. introduced these undead characters but they didnt have much bearing with the end of the book. good read thoughPublished 3 months ago by David M. Hunsinger