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The Millstone Prophecy: A Dax McGowan Mystery Kindle Edition

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Length: 340 pages Word Wise: Enabled

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NYT's best selling author, Mary Jane Clark, wrote on her Facebook page, "It's as if Jack Harney had a crystal ball!"

What a read! What a ride! Harney has it all: the pacing of a James Patterson; the lead character development of a John Sandford; and a dash of Arthur Conan Doyle thrown in for good measure. A reader couldn't ask for more...
(Paul J. Kledzik)

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While I understood that writers are often driven in their work, it wasn't until I began to write The Millstone Prophecy that I actually got that. I was well into writing a totally unrelated non-fiction work when my plans changed after viewing the Academy Award nominated documentary, Deliver Us from Evil. I became incensed that anyone, ANYONE, could escape the law for defiling the bodies and minds of children, as had been done for decades, centuries really, by Catholic clergy, and then covered up by its leadership.

I decided to drop my non-fiction project and dove into writing TMP. My plan was to reach a wider audience on the issue by writing a suspense/thriller that could stand on its own in that genre. I also wanted to give readers well researched insights into the true nature of these crimes as my character, Dax McGowan, faced all the walls and barriers that real life victims and their parents have often found nearly impossible to overcome.  

 
As of the time of this writing, I am pleased to report that through promotions and sales Millstone has been downloaded over 32,000 times. My portion of the proceeds from all sales is contributed to SNAP, Survivors Network of those Abused by Priests.

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  • File Size: 540 KB
  • Print Length: 340 pages
  • Publisher: Dax Productions, LLC; Second Edition edition (July 26, 2011)
  • Publication Date: July 26, 2011
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B005F5C328
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Word Wise: Enabled
  • Lending: Enabled
  • Enhanced Typesetting: Not Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #531,272 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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I am Bronx born of Irish descent. Despite a family move to Michigan as a teenager, where I spent most of my adult life, New York City keeps calling me back. Because my ancestors arrived through Ellis Island more than a century ago, I sometimes think I possess a genetic component that craves a very specific high energy environment indigenous only to NYC. On my bucket list is to eventually end up back there...well for summers at least.

So it was no fluke that my first writing work would revolve around a famed, Bronx born, Irish N.Y.P.D. detective, Dax McGowan. In the "Millstone Prophecy" he is driven to track down and kill the pedophile priest that caused his daughter's suicide. The story involves a manhunt that takes him to the walls of Vatican City and beyond with startling results.

There are also two very strong women who Dax must engage in order to reach his prey. Janet Meehan is a street smart S.V.U. detective, and Rebecca Bain heads a worldwide sex abuse victim's network. She also carries a secret Dax endeavors to uncover...this relationship involving some intriguing twists. Dax has his quirks, but without them, he'd be less than the revered detective he is.


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113 of 129 people found the following review helpful By Skadoo on January 27, 2012
Format: Paperback
The Millstone Prophecy was loaned to me by a friend who asked for my honest opinion on the novel. Criticizing anyone's creative work is never a joyful task. In the author's defense I understand how difficult it is to 1) write and 2) write well. However, not offering an honest criticism in the face of twenty-four 5-Star ratings would be doing future readers and the author a disservice. I wouldn't buy a boat, find that it leaks, and not tell the boat builder his work is flawed.

I'll keep this simple: the storyline of Millstone Prophecy is weak, predictable and rife with clichés and stereotypes. The hero 9/11 cop, lesbian detective with attitude and pervert priest is the stuff of made for TV movies. The characters are thin and lifeless; I honestly could not like, dislike, sympathize or otherwise identify with any of the characters because the author didn't take the time and effort to develop them. Too much energy was put into trying to make each chapter akin to a Fox News Alert with little or no attempt towards character development. What is more, the protagonist's morphing into a famous literary detective is bizarre and more fitting for a 1980s Leslie Nielsen spoof film than a serious attempt at fiction. From a technical standpoint the novel is flawed, and in some cases terribly flawed. Apparently, the author did no research on his alleged home town (MY home town), or how real NYPD detectives work. I question the credentials of his NYPD technical advisor.

All that being said, I do applaud the author's effort. I think I see where he was trying to go with this novel; a sort of Dan Brown meets Clive Cussler meets Lawrence Sanders mix. He didn't pull it off.
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48 of 56 people found the following review helpful By magicmarv on April 12, 2012
Format: Kindle Edition Verified Purchase
I am only into this book 12% and already have over 20 notes regarding editing issues. This author seems to be trying to write in a complex manner and is not pulling it off. There are SO many grammatical errors, punctuation errors, and improper word usage errors it is irritating.

I am tired of stopping my reading to make notes in my kindle. I usually make notes for myself when I start to see a plethora of errors, so I can be precise in my review but this is getting ridiculous. I can hardly get through an entire page without finding something wrong.

Trying to write complexly often gets amateurs in trouble. What they THINK come off as wonderfully flowing words wind up a literary nightmare. Simple is better, especially if you are not a student of English or journalism.

It takes a reasonable command of the English language to write well. You don't start sentences with "but", you don't throw commas in wherever you feel like it Many of the sentences are extremely poorly written, and are either awkward or confusing.

Unfortunately, with so much self publishing going in these days, books that are not edited or are poorly edited are becoming too common.

This author needs to get someone who is very good at editing to help him/her re-write this book. It needs to be re-written from start to finish.

I suggest this be his/her last attempt at a novel unless he/she brushes up on English grammar.

I am amazed this book has so many "gold stars"...it sure does not deserve them.

Edit: I have completed this book and would like to add to my review. The plot in this book is one that could be a good novel, but the author simply tried too hard.
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14 of 16 people found the following review helpful By A. Kopp on July 7, 2012
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As some other people have given 1 or 2 stars, I can say they are spot on. I would like to add some comments on the badly researched part where the main characters travel to Europe. The author tried to give an international flair by having the italian cop's language sprinkled with italian expressions, - but otherwise expressing themselves with a highly literary and complex english, the way not even english people speak. Same for the Belgian, sprinkling French- but worst were the German people. Dear Author, it is Die Ratte, not Das Ratte, and the invented words moeder and meneer... I assume this was supposed to mean Mutter (mother) and Mein Herr? and then suddenly.. the book was over! the whole grand finale was bunged into an epilogue. To bad, the idea of the story was actually not bad at all, but this was more of a students attempt to write a paper in Dan Browne style, but not something to be published.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful By George M Chapman on February 10, 2013
Format: Kindle Edition
The sexual abuse of children by anyone is terrible, and by clergy it is especially horrific. This tale of abuse and the search for justice is compelling and, despite the subject, exciting. I was engaged from beginning to end, and look forward to more offerings from Jack Harney. I hope there will be a "series" of some sort.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful By Arthur A. Decker on March 22, 2013
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Like the others I have read, it kept you on the edge, wondering just what was about to happen. When you think you have it....you don't. Like the structure of the story, and the slow build to the end. Thanks for a great read. Arthur Decker, Bristol, Connecticut.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful By tracee on March 21, 2013
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I really enjoyed reading this book. I loved all of the Michigan references since I am from Michigan. I found this book to have some surprises in it and that always makes a book enjoyable to me. I will definitely be looking for more books from this author.
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