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The Millstone Prophecy: A Dax McGowan Mystery [Kindle Edition]

Jack Harney
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Book Description

Famed N.Y.P.D. Lieutenant, Dax McGowan, tracks down the pedophile priest who caused his daughter to commit suicide. A city-wide investigation soon turns into an international manhunt taking him to the gates of the Vatican and beyond with startling results. An intransigent hierarchy, a wimpish legal community's response, and his own conscience thwart the detective's efforts as his own life becomes imperiled in the process.

Editorial Reviews


NYT's best selling author, Mary Jane Clark, wrote on her Facebook page, "It's as if Jack Harney had a crystal ball!"

What a read! What a ride! Harney has it all: the pacing of a James Patterson; the lead character development of a John Sandford; and a dash of Arthur Conan Doyle thrown in for good measure. A reader couldn't ask for more...
(Paul J. Kledzik)

From the Author

From the Author
While I understood that writers are often driven in their work, it wasn't until I began to write The Millstone Prophecy that I actually got that. I was well into writing a totally unrelated non-fiction work when my plans changed after viewing the Academy Award nominated documentary, Deliver Us from Evil. I became incensed that anyone, ANYONE, could escape the law for defiling the bodies and minds of children, as had been done for decades, centuries really, by Catholic clergy, and then covered up by its leadership.

I decided to drop my non-fiction project and dove into writing TMP. My plan was to reach a wider audience on the issue by writing a suspense/thriller that could stand on its own in that genre. I also wanted to give readers well researched insights into the true nature of these crimes as my character, Dax McGowan, faced all the walls and barriers that real life victims and their parents have often found nearly impossible to overcome.  

As of the time of this writing, I am pleased to report that through promotions and sales Millstone has been downloaded over 32,000 times. My portion of the proceeds from all sales is contributed to SNAP, Survivors Network of those Abused by Priests.

Product Details

  • File Size: 540 KB
  • Print Length: 340 pages
  • Publisher: Dax Productions, LLC; Second Edition edition (July 26, 2011)
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B005F5C328
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #341,998 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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112 of 128 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars Like a Runny Egg January 27, 2012
By Skadoo
The Millstone Prophecy was loaned to me by a friend who asked for my honest opinion on the novel. Criticizing anyone's creative work is never a joyful task. In the author's defense I understand how difficult it is to 1) write and 2) write well. However, not offering an honest criticism in the face of twenty-four 5-Star ratings would be doing future readers and the author a disservice. I wouldn't buy a boat, find that it leaks, and not tell the boat builder his work is flawed.

I'll keep this simple: the storyline of Millstone Prophecy is weak, predictable and rife with clichés and stereotypes. The hero 9/11 cop, lesbian detective with attitude and pervert priest is the stuff of made for TV movies. The characters are thin and lifeless; I honestly could not like, dislike, sympathize or otherwise identify with any of the characters because the author didn't take the time and effort to develop them. Too much energy was put into trying to make each chapter akin to a Fox News Alert with little or no attempt towards character development. What is more, the protagonist's morphing into a famous literary detective is bizarre and more fitting for a 1980s Leslie Nielsen spoof film than a serious attempt at fiction. From a technical standpoint the novel is flawed, and in some cases terribly flawed. Apparently, the author did no research on his alleged home town (MY home town), or how real NYPD detectives work. I question the credentials of his NYPD technical advisor.

All that being said, I do applaud the author's effort. I think I see where he was trying to go with this novel; a sort of Dan Brown meets Clive Cussler meets Lawrence Sanders mix. He didn't pull it off.
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47 of 55 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars Amateurish attempt-- needs thorugh editing April 12, 2012
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I am only into this book 12% and already have over 20 notes regarding editing issues. This author seems to be trying to write in a complex manner and is not pulling it off. There are SO many grammatical errors, punctuation errors, and improper word usage errors it is irritating.

I am tired of stopping my reading to make notes in my kindle. I usually make notes for myself when I start to see a plethora of errors, so I can be precise in my review but this is getting ridiculous. I can hardly get through an entire page without finding something wrong.

Trying to write complexly often gets amateurs in trouble. What they THINK come off as wonderfully flowing words wind up a literary nightmare. Simple is better, especially if you are not a student of English or journalism.

It takes a reasonable command of the English language to write well. You don't start sentences with "but", you don't throw commas in wherever you feel like it Many of the sentences are extremely poorly written, and are either awkward or confusing.

Unfortunately, with so much self publishing going in these days, books that are not edited or are poorly edited are becoming too common.

This author needs to get someone who is very good at editing to help him/her re-write this book. It needs to be re-written from start to finish.

I suggest this be his/her last attempt at a novel unless he/she brushes up on English grammar.

I am amazed this book has so many "gold stars" sure does not deserve them.

Edit: I have completed this book and would like to add to my review. The plot in this book is one that could be a good novel, but the author simply tried too hard.
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14 of 16 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars not well researched, needs editing July 7, 2012
By A. Kopp
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As some other people have given 1 or 2 stars, I can say they are spot on. I would like to add some comments on the badly researched part where the main characters travel to Europe. The author tried to give an international flair by having the italian cop's language sprinkled with italian expressions, - but otherwise expressing themselves with a highly literary and complex english, the way not even english people speak. Same for the Belgian, sprinkling French- but worst were the German people. Dear Author, it is Die Ratte, not Das Ratte, and the invented words moeder and meneer... I assume this was supposed to mean Mutter (mother) and Mein Herr? and then suddenly.. the book was over! the whole grand finale was bunged into an epilogue. To bad, the idea of the story was actually not bad at all, but this was more of a students attempt to write a paper in Dan Browne style, but not something to be published.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars I enjoyed this book March 22, 2013
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Like the others I have read, it kept you on the edge, wondering just what was about to happen. When you think you have don't. Like the structure of the story, and the slow build to the end. Thanks for a great read. Arthur Decker, Bristol, Connecticut.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Loved it March 21, 2013
By tracee
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I really enjoyed reading this book. I loved all of the Michigan references since I am from Michigan. I found this book to have some surprises in it and that always makes a book enjoyable to me. I will definitely be looking for more books from this author.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Abuse February 18, 2013
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This is a very well written and though book with lots of suspense. The story well bring tears and also joy to the reader. Has a lot of short chapters but really well spelled out from chapter to chapter.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Great book. Didn't put it down until it was done.
I really enjoyed this book. When I can't figure it out until the very end that to me is a good book
Published 1 month ago by Winona55
3.0 out of 5 stars Secrets revealed
Definitely not a page took me a long time to finish it I had to stop and forget it will do eat and then come back to the book. Read more
Published 3 months ago by MindReader
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Published 5 months ago by Dionne Neufville Fraser
3.0 out of 5 stars The Millstone prophesy
Interesting handling of sexual abuse scandal of the Catholic church. However too wordy and stilted at times. Ending is s great example of the need for a more smooth conclusion.
Published 11 months ago by Beverly Davis
4.0 out of 5 stars Just go ahead and download it, you won't be sorry.
I could not put it down. What a great read. I would like to see more with the same detective , what an interesting character. I loved the Sherlock Holmes take.
Published 11 months ago by daniel huffman
2.0 out of 5 stars seems like the author's first attempt
This book seems amateurish to me. I don't believe that the author is an established writer. I am guessing it is a first book and maybe self published. Read more
Published 12 months ago by michelle b
3.0 out of 5 stars good read
Great read that kept me turning the pages. Romance at the end was forced and felt like the author needed to rush to end the book.
Published 12 months ago by Elaine Heit
5.0 out of 5 stars good read and eye opening on the subject on the Catholic church trying...
I thought this book was well-written and carried the suspense well throughout. The low reviews that this book has gotten may be more about the subject matter -- people feeling... Read more
Published 12 months ago by Reflections
2.0 out of 5 stars The Millstone Prophecy
I tried to read this book, but I could not get into it. It just is not my type of book. After attempting, I just deleted it from my kindle.
Published 17 months ago by Avid Reader
5.0 out of 5 stars Very well written and engaging crime mystery
I could not put this book down - contrary to other reviews I found this book well edited. The story line draws you in - characters are well developed and believable. Read more
Published 18 months ago by FloB
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More About the Author

I am Bronx born of Irish descent. Despite a family move to Michigan as a teenager, where I spent most of my adult life, New York City keeps calling me back. Because my ancestors arrived through Ellis Island more than a century ago, I sometimes think I possess a genetic component that craves a very specific high energy environment indigenous only to NYC. On my bucket list is to eventually end up back there...well for summers at least.

So it was no fluke that my first writing work would revolve around a famed, Bronx born, Irish N.Y.P.D. detective, Dax McGowan. In the "Millstone Prophecy" he is driven to track down and kill the pedophile priest that caused his daughter's suicide. The story involves a manhunt that takes him to the walls of Vatican City and beyond with startling results.

There are also two very strong women who Dax must engage in order to reach his prey. Janet Meehan is a street smart S.V.U. detective, and Rebecca Bain heads a worldwide sex abuse victim's network. She also carries a secret Dax endeavors to uncover...this relationship involving some intriguing twists. Dax has his quirks, but without them, he'd be less than the revered detective he is.

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