Plot/Storyline: 1 1/2 Stars
The opening scene, with the exception of the point of view issues which will be mentioned again below, really drew me into this story. As a matter of fact, most of the first half kept me enthralled. Unfortunately, the book began to delve into the ridiculous.
My only issue with the plot in the first half is that the author seemed to vacillate between what should be happening to Monica and others as part of their `curse.' Supposedly, accidents are following them around, meaning that since Monica was the sole survivor of a car accident, everywhere she went she was pretty much a jinx to anyone in or around a vehicle. However, as more 'sole survivor stories' are related, it is revealed that not only do accidents happen around these people, they are supposedly drawn to areas where accidents will occur. Monica never seemed to be drawn to seek out these accidents until she discovers well into the book that others are so drawn. The only explanation given is that she chose to work near a highway. That just didn't seem like enough for her to later be running out of the house suddenly and speeding to a highway to witness an accident. These two scenarios seemed to conflict constantly. Had the author just stuck with one scenario or the other, the storyline would have worked out much better and not appeared to be so `patched together.'
The second half just got silly with the descriptions of the `creatures', some of which supposedly eat portions of accident victims. Not only do they manage to eat flesh without breaking skin, but it's also something that coroners never seem to discover.
One error in the story really got to me. Toward the end, a friend of Monica's is in the hospital. Monica pulls out her cell phone to call the hospital to check on her friend. The hospital tells her to come quickly. As she is on the way, another friend asks why they didn't call Monica on her cell. Monica pulls out her cell phone, the same one she called the hospital with, and says that they couldn't contact her because her cell phone was dead.
Character Development: 3 Stars
Monica started out as a pretty interesting character. However, as the story developed, she became less and less believable. The author portrays her as being naive because she was pretty much a hermit since the deaths of her parents. However, this was just taken too far. The girl had had jobs, so she interacted with other people, even if on a purely superficial level. Unless she just went home and stared at the wall, I have to assume that she read books. Also, she wasn't so young when her parents died that her social skills wouldn't have been more deveoped, albeit a little rusty.
The supporting characters were rather flat and uninteresting.
Writing Style: 2 1/2 Stars
As mentioned above, there were point of view issues in the opening scene. I do have to admit to POV problems being one of my pet peeves.
The descriptions of the various accidents were convoluted and difficult to follow. The dialogue was on the level of a pre-teen book.