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The Twelve Stones: Book One [Kindle Edition]

RJ Johnson
4.1 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (201 customer reviews)

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Book Description

Twenty two years ago, Alex McCray found the first of the Twelve Stones, a set of powerful artifacts left for Humanity to find and use to save Earth from certain destruction.

Returning to his hometown of Onyx, California, Alex reunites with his father who returns the stone Alex found so many years ago. Their reunion is cut short however after Alex's father is murdered by billionaire industrialist Rupert Kline, a madman who will stop at nothing to collect all twelve stones for himself.

Driven by revenge, Alex McCray vows to bring his father's killer to justice and keep the remaining Twelve Stones out of Kline's hands.

A thrilling tale that mixes romance, cutting edge science, and oh yeah, the fate of human civilization.

*Note* This is the second edition of The Twelve Stones. Edits have been made to address the typos mentioned in the reviews below.The book might still suck, but at least it sucks with 99% less typos.


Product Details

  • File Size: 1853 KB
  • Print Length: 316 pages
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publisher: Smashwords (January 15, 2012)
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B0070CSKE4
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #420,929 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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55 of 59 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars A page-turner February 7, 2012
Format:Kindle Edition
RJ Johnson's The Twelve Stones is an action-adventure tale about Alex McCray, his pursuit of justice for the death of his father and the secret behind the mysterious twelve stones. He's up against the ruthless multi-billionaire, Rupert Kline, and his army of thugs. But not to worry. He's got his trusty lifelong best friend and ex-girlfriend to help him out. This is a fun book to read and it's quite the page-turner.

The story begins twenty-something years ago when Alex and Scott were just young kids out having an adventure. Alex even then thought of himself as an adventurer and nerdy Scott, forever grateful that he's got a friend, liked following Alex around. Alex found the first of the twelve stones, which for some strange reason seems to have the magical power to heal even the severest of injuries. Ted McCray decided to keep the stone for a while until Alex was ready for the responsibility of possessing the mysterious item.

Fast forward to the present and Alex shows up on the homestead to see his father after apparently having been "dead" for six years. The story really takes off when Rupert Kline shoots Ted McCray in front of his son and left Alex for dead. After that, it's a thrilling cat-and-mouse game as Kline's thugs attempt to locate Alex in order to finish the job they botched up while Alex seeks out his old sidekick Scott and ex-girlfriend Emily for help.

Like I said, the story is fast-paced. You get a sense of purpose on every page as each word propels the story forward. No meandering whatsoever. Even the flashbacks are purposeful. There are things that I didn't particularly like however.
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66 of 73 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars Promising premise but poorly executed December 18, 2012
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When I started reading The Twelve Stones, I was initially hooked and settled down for what I expected to be an enjoyable read. Unfortunately, the more I read, the less I enjoyed it.

The story follows Alex, a man with a past, as he battles an evil billionaire who is intent on taking over the world. The author has a vivid imagination, and his ability to paint a picture with words is good. Formatting and the copy-editing were adequate. (I must admit that the author's comments in the book description on the re-edited version were pretty funny and were ultimately what made my decision to buy the book.)

I have several problems with the book, though. The first one is the author's lack of adherence to reality. I am not writing here about the stones, but the disregard for physics, martial arts, law enforcement, the military, anatomy, history, timing--the list goes on. Science fiction or not, you can't pinch "soft tissue" and hit a disabling nerve, kung fu does not have "sensei," (nor is the art anything like what was described, for that matter), blowing a gas pocket would not cause the "biggest natural disaster in history," Camp Pendleton is not an Army base, colonels do not go to basic training together then serve together in combat with their "buddies," cars would not be able to travel for six hours on California highways at 126 MPH and not get stopped by the highway patrol--and on and on in this vein. The book is quite frankly rife with these mistakes, most of which could be alleviated with a simple Google search. To me, as a reader, it seemed like the author was so caught up with his storyline that he had too many throw-away aspects that he just invented their reality as an easy way out.

Coincidences were too pat for me, too deus ex machina.
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36 of 39 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars Pretty bad but promising! June 10, 2012
By SSB
Format:Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
The novel needs a good editor and decent formatting. It is not as bad as many but the errors start to wear on the reader, distracting from the book. The book itself demonstrated the writer's vivid imagination, which shows promise, but is not really much more than one long chase. You know the type, run here, run there, run from the bad guys and finally defeat them. Today, after finishing, I can remember a couple of the character's names. I am sure I won't remember them tomorrow. The characterizations are not only very flat but also very sterotypical. The premise is original but the books draws from other, much better, works. I was able to finish it. I found it mildly entertaining if irritatingly flawed. Two stars since I was able to finish a pretty bad book.
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23 of 25 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Amazing June 28, 2013
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Amazing story! Could not put it down until I finished it. Waiting anxiously for the next one. Great, awesome story!!!!!!
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21 of 23 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Great action, storytelling and adventure: March 15, 2012
Format:Kindle Edition
This is a well written thrilling novel that mixes romance and revenge. The story is challenging and enforces the reader to think beyond the norm. This is a story about Alex McCray who is an enthusiastic and adventure loving guy who vows to bring his father's killer to justice and save the humanity from certain destruction. In this novel RJ Johnson's imagination and writing talent is at his best. I truly enjoyed reading this book.
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24 of 27 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Great book for all readers January 22, 2012
By L.
Format:Kindle Edition
I will start this review by saying I am not a huge fan of Science Fiction novels. Having said that, this book is defiantly worth the read and I recommend it to all readers!

RJ Johnson's writing is filled with vivid descriptions that will transport you to a fantasy land based off California . As you read, you feel as though you are in the action and living out the story with Alex. Each chapter offers new adventure that will be hard to put down. The book is well-rounded as it is filled with action, but maintains a love story and intermitted comedic relief.
I highly recommend this book!
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Most Recent Customer Reviews
5.0 out of 5 stars Great science fiction adventure read!
RJ Johnson has written a wonderful novel with a science fiction flavor with heroes with super extraordinary powers bestowed them by accident (or was it intentionally ordained? Read more
Published 1 day ago by Jeanscape
5.0 out of 5 stars Enjoyable and Fasinating
I really enjoyed this book. I didn't care for the ending , but I'm excited about Book 2.
Published 2 days ago by SSM
4.0 out of 5 stars Intriguing
A new spin on sci fi. It was an enjoyable read, with some interesting twists and turns. The plot fanciful enough to keep me scrolling through the pages. Read more
Published 4 days ago by Forest Dweller
3.0 out of 5 stars Three Stars
not what I expedted
Published 8 days ago by Kathy Irish
5.0 out of 5 stars Really enjoyed this book even though others had said things they ...
Really enjoyed this book even though others had said things they didn't like about it. I think it has potential for a movie. Read more
Published 12 days ago by Teri
5.0 out of 5 stars Outstanding read in The Twelve Stones: Book One.
I rated this book so highly was the author's mix of characters, the stones, and the overall plot woven so well together. Read more
Published 28 days ago by R. Flagg
4.0 out of 5 stars very good
Had to get number two right away! Kept me reading all night! Excellent!
Getting ready to start #2 right now.
Published 1 month ago by Susan R. Gatewood
3.0 out of 5 stars Good story telling.
Refreshing way to w:rite.
Published 1 month ago by Gerard Cartas
4.0 out of 5 stars Four Stars
Another good read.
Published 1 month ago by Suzy
3.0 out of 5 stars Good storyline
An enjoyable read but the author desperately needs a proof reader. Found some "errors" quite distracting. Read more
Published 1 month ago by Alma Hunter
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More About the Author

RJ Johnson is an award winning author from San Diego, California. He was inspired to write novels back in the second grade when his teacher bound together a short story he'd written for class into a small book. His passion for writing ignited, Johnson spent the next twenty years learning everything he could to become an author.

His greatest hope is to write something worth reading. The results of his efforts so far, are available below.

In addition to writing, RJ also spends his days producing talk radio in San Diego.

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