I have spoilers through here. Ok look, first you cannot ignore the return series came first. This series tries to undo that. YOU CAN'T. I do not like these characters. At all. Even an SE ending would be ok, but this lacks anything similar to who we love. Too much too late and that is my opinion. Ok, I'll be critical in the way that some may feel having read the original series and the rest. This doesn't mean I hated it, but will show the strong with the weak. Here it goes!
"Good read" in its flow, but climax falls short after a pretty good build. This was frustrating to me as I was happy for something big to occur and then it was over after all of that. The premise was good, but again the author tries to undo older books, and it sounds like the TV series too much. Elena's part was kind of dull in comparison to how she was in the return series 'all powerful'. If you had read this and not the other part of the return, it would have been better than the Wings-Make sense? It is like a 'flower blooming' was so spot on without being all out there. New author did a better job, yet the story itself didn't lend itself to this plot. Why is she coming back into powers when they were stripped? That makes no sense. And why are her powers so weak now?
She'd had abilities before (in the return she was brought back with them) without the reason they said...then kind of changed in a way it didn't make sense. She had to earn them and they were so off from before....I was like huh? These changes were not congruent with her previous ways/powers. Bam suddenly she grew up? I felt more in the today then I ever have which was neat. It didn't have a nineties feel to it. Mystery as always was good, but was rushed in my opinion. I felt that with the others too. Of the three this is the best hands down, but it lacks the real beauty of the original series that both worked on together. think this is the editor? of the first series. There is no way with words, no spark, but there is constancy a simplicity with good build. Of course I can't fathom a writers conception so forgive my critique. Even still I can't want to like it. I didn't like how it was handled enough to care where Stefan and Elena go. I love Damon so that's that. And her seriously kills someone again. If the tv show and this are the same,forget it. Damon on tv is a shadow of who he was in the first three books.
As this is a conclusion to the hunters...it would have been better had nothing been pre-written as I have said before as it's own story (without the return series). Elena's love, that was once equal, destroyed her character for many people. So she blew up a moon in her rage and grief but lets him go as easy as she had without never dealing with her feelings. And then goes back on that love as if it never happened. There is a term for girls like that. And WOW, that is horrid of her. Go guard some thing else, Elena, you are a hallow husk of a girl.
And he STILL has a piece of her? It's silly so just stop it. It doesn't feel like he was loved in a way that would make it change him. Even if she didn't love him, which made no sense. This is more whacky than if they tried it out and broke up. If the publishers were worried about the way a teen girl would see this, I am telling you I would not let my daughter read it as it ended. She never deals, she never feels and she never grew. A choice is not growing. The words are there but no. That would be closure for her but she never has it (how many times had she nearly lost Stefan at this point?). How is this epic love when you fall in love- or use someone- in place of his brother. How can he even want to be connected to her after that. Unrealistic. Was there no better way to do this? Perhaps I am overly critical, but many people love Damon and he is always the fall guy. I know he is not perfect, and he got in the way of SE, but he is a GOOD character. Now he is forced to be Stefan 2.0 if you look at the whole bond thing. We didn't want that, but thanks. Is that any better than realizing you accidentally fell in love with someone else and decided to go on your own and be a real woman about it? Stefan was a floor mat yet he's in more action which was good. Elena is as always in peril and never as strong. I miss her being strong and witty.
Yet many SE fans may feel she redeemed herself to a degree. That is good consistency again too from the last book at least. I was let down that she basically used him all this time for what was a lousy explanation of 'family'. I was glad to see she stuck it through with Stefan, but I felt so empty after reading it. Despite her best efforts, Elena is not a good person to me. But then she wasn't to many SE fans rightly so for her involvement with Damon. Damon irritated me in this book. It was like he became TV Damon and that is not Damon. To each his own. I tried it LJ and I am done. This is like the tv show, and I'd rather have books 1-3 stay fresh in my mind. Elena was a girl who was a snob, but she grew up, she died for those she loved. And while she fell for both boys, she wanted them to be family over wanting to get between them.
I am glad she 'grew up', but LJ made many mistakes (and I love her) but others have said that too and they carried over. All of these vampires resurrection made Damon's death stupid. The guardian's look stupid. This forced the new writer to fix and change stuff. This is why it rates low-i feel empty still. The story at the end of the day for this OK did all it could do, it did it well, but you cannot really fix it. not without ignoring one part for the other. So I did mention the continued problems. And I agree but it came over from that series to this one and should have been changed. Example-Kathrine has memories though she was dead. Weren't they supposed to go out (aside Elena who was a guardian)? This hardened female (Kat) did a 180 and I felt like saying 'seriously.'....thought vampires just went out. Another TV allusion.
It makes it hard to read and follow, especially the time lapse. The author did try to explain this with Meredith explaining the changes to Christan, but here we go with the SIRE bond. And Klaus. Again. Thought Damon forgot himself...that was frustrating but not as much. There was a lot of thought put into it which made me feel good at the effort but I still threw it against the wall. The other thing is you kind of have this sire thing going on all over with Original crap. Now everyone is bound. Elena must have been smitten with Damon because of that. Oh really....? Which made me think back to when Elena was turned the first time. Her infatuation to Damon is kind of explained logically. Nothing about Bonnie's professed death, nothing of the midnight dinner DE fans. Just Elena was most likely implied as being turned by him since she was most effected by him right after. It was obvious they wanted to tear any Bamon and Delena out of the plot. Thanks from the fans, you ruined it for us. Even SE was hard to take after the way it was done. I care not that it was done, just the way all of this was done. Again, my opinion.
This author did the best she could reworking it, which I give credit for. Elena in the first three was just a person you either liked or hated. Now I detest her as anyone on the other may have for leading one of two bothers on. The guardian thing she did with her in this part was hands down wonderful. My issue is that it doesn't work in with other books. You do get the feel Elena had to grow up, but its too much to late. I just wish this had been its own series. it would have fared much better. These two-if put together-are awesome. You'll notice many tv related terms like Original wolf... Sorry DE fans, this is all about SE and Elena. It almost seems like the return never happened, yet some things are brought back-oddly.That actually ticked me off. Christan was a great example of that. I was like-why? Same with Matt. Katherine seriously made me feel like the tv show will be the same way and its not worth being a DE fan at this rate. Even the 'piece of me' thing at the end was a bone to us for nothing. Just let it die if it will. It makes no sense as to why that was even said. DE fans do not want a connection if he was used and loved her. And unrequited again? From equal to that? She picked Stefan let it just stand already- no connection no nothing. Even his actions in the first part per like 'really'? 180 there too.He never seemed to change though I was getting what was being given to me I couldn't swallow it. because it was too fast. Man, makes me so frustrated that this was not its own series with diff characters. None of them are the remotely the same.
Spoilers:
Damon and Elena are tied by life. If he kills she dies. They set her out to kill him, she tries to get round it. She loves him as family.
Damon allows histie to her to make sure that he cant even compulse people. (So he is Stefan 2.0)
Elena's blood drank by old creatures kills them. Margret could be the same.
Elena's sister is like her but here's a new one for ya: Elena has a new sister!-Katherine. yup. she's all sweet about it too "I had ime to think when I was dead"-so you never went out as vampires were supposed to? AGAIN! CAn we at least get new people and not rez an old plot? c'mon.
Elena became a guardian-her first task was to kill Damon-she couldn't this see above as a result (they get tied to assure this)
Katherine rez'd by Klaus too. He never notices she isn't therwhen he fights in one scene, and what she does while there? oh and she doesn't kill now.
Katherine harbors no hate towards Elena or Stefan and Damon.
Elena's mom rejected her guardianship but her children were to have blood that would kill old ones.
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