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This Time You Lose - A Readers Choice Top Ten Novel

"5 Stars! I'm so glad that I decided to give this book a chance - it's EXCELLENT! This Time You Lose grabbed my attention from the very first page, and I read it in one sitting! (Went to bed, and was up reading under the blankets until the early hours of the morning!) Very well-written book, a fast-paced and suspenseful read that kept me on the edge of my seat. Found myself actually saying "OH CRAP!" out loud at a few points. The writing is superb, characters are believable and likable and descriptions are vivid and visible - I felt as though I was right there alongside the characters. There is foul language and some violence, but it is tastefully handled and nothing is overly graphic. If you enjoy thrilling, suspenseful stories, definitely give this one a chance. You won't be disappointed." ~ Taylor Wilmering, writer - Hampshire, England

"Wow Wow Wow! What a story that could truly happen to anyone!" ~ Shellie Brewer, Goodreads.com

"Wow! This story takes off with a bang as you basically wake up alongside Lisa and are instantly thrust into her living nightmare. The tension is there throughout the entire book and it has the feel of watching some horrible hostage situation unfold on the news before your very eyes. This book actually gave me goosebumps at times! I was definitely on the edge of my seat, biting my finger nails. The story was definitely unpredictable. Another thing I loved was Lisa herself. What a tough cookie! She easily ranks high on my 'Bad-ass Heroine' list. I could only hope and pray that I'd have half the courage and cojones this woman possessed in time of true crisis." ~ Rachel Michaux, - Rachel's Reviews

From the Author

This Time You Lose is a Readers Choice Top Ten Novel, and has been read and reviewed around the world. You may view ALL of the reader reviews (316 total as of 8/3/13)  - collected from various sites worldwide - by visiting my website at  thistimeyoulose.com.

If you have already read This Time You Lose, please drop me a review and let me know what you thought. Reviews from readers like you help make my next book even better! :)

One last thing....if you are so inclined - please include your city/state/country along with your review so that I may add it to the "World Tour" maps on my website. There are no names on the map, just arrows showing the locations where This Time You Lose has been read and reviewed. :)   

Thanks for Reading!
Chris

Product Details

  • File Size: 2365 KB
  • Print Length: 295 pages
  • Publisher: Chris Stralyn; 1 edition (November 11, 2011)
  • Publication Date: November 11, 2011
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B006KWKOEE
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #29,668 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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I never intended to be a writer. Short-order cook, security guard, safety officer, childcare provider, and teacher were all titles I'd worn - but never writer. Then I entered an essay contest for "The Worst Vacation Ever" and won. Writing became my new hobby, and soon I had several articles in print with local publications. This was followed by a short story, The Khaki Pants, which was published by RDR Publishing in an anthology that went on to sell over a million copies.

A suspense thriller was my next undertaking, and in 2008 This Time You Lose was named a finalist in the TNBW Strongest Start Novel Competition. Four months later it earned the distinction of being a TNBW Readers Choice Top Ten Novel, and has remained on the Top Ten list ever since.

I continue to put pen to paper in my endeavour to appease the Muse within. I live in Michigan with my husband and family.

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12 of 13 people found the following review helpful By MobileMinx on March 2, 2012
Format: Kindle Edition
** I won this book through a Bookplex giveaway **

This Time You Lose is the perfect choice for a suspense seeker. If you want to have a tense, tight and terror filled read from practically the first page to the last, you've found the right book.

The story relates the occurrences, over a day, in the life of child care provider Lisa Kaamp. She is accompanied by many supporting characters and one seriously sadistic antagonist. It is difficult to discuss my experience of this story without revealing key elements of the plot. Suffice it to say, there is a conflict that consumes the entire novel and is resolved very quickly at the end.

Herein, for me, lies the problem. The writing is done in real-time and presents an hour-by-hour capture of the action. However, it was sometimes unclear what the chronology was as events described occurred concurrently. The book would be well suited to a time stamp for each chapter, so that the reader can keep the timeline straight. I also found the unanswered question, which is threaded throughout, an unsettling feature. It's not clear if it is intentional, but the reader never knows why TITO, the depraved aggressor, targets Lisa so vehemently. I was left to wonder and this was not good when there was so much that transpired that seemed inexplicably evil. I don't mind some uncertainty, but this seemed to be an excessive amount and it detracted from my enjoyment of the story. As the novel reaches its climax, we have to hold our breath as we wait to find out how the situation is resolved. This state of protracted agitation is precisely the condition I was in for the whole book. It's the reason that I didn't award five stars.

Chris Stralyn is a very good writer. She uses language that is real, raw and appropriate for the character.
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12 of 14 people found the following review helpful By S. Hurley on September 6, 2012
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I read the reviews and decided this looked like something I would enjoy as I like thrillers - however I was so disappointed I actually didn't read to the end because I knew it couldn't get any better. I deleted it from my Kindle. The first thing that got me was when the police dispatcher rang the house knowing there was something wrong and the kidnappers put Lisa on the phone to speak to them - but of course the kidnappers didn't listen in, just threatened Lisa that she better say nothing to arouse the dispatchers suspicions - please! And if I had to read how 'Lisa was a godsend' and they 'didn't know how they would have coped before she opened her Daycare' etc. argh its no wonder I deleted it.It was far too cliched for my liking - If you want a thriller try anything by Michael Connelly, Lee Childs, John Sandford. Those that loved it must be used to reading terrible stuff if they think this is excellent!
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38 of 51 people found the following review helpful By Addy on May 26, 2012
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It's a short read and it isn't all that bad for what it is. I will admit that I powered through from chapter 9 to the end of the book because I did want to see how it all ended up. A few things bothered me about it though which made it seem pretty unbelievable and overall left a bad taste in my mouth. I felt like I was watching a really cheesy episode of a crime TV show, if you're into that sort of thing.

The cops seemed more like the three stooges than anything else and always seemed 12 steps behind what was going on inside. I understand that this is sometimes the case, especially with that many hostages, but for such a seasoned negotiator, he sure didn't do much negotiating.

Also, how the heck were the parents in agreement all of the time, especially with how those scenarios could have played out? And 99% of the time, the kids listened and were obedient. I know they were probably scared into submission but after an entire day of being hot, hungry, and bored, I would have expected a lot more mischief from the kids.

Another thing I did't like (**spoilers**!!):

Ryan knew that his girlfriend was enrolling the baby in daycare because that's how he knew the house would be empty (she would have to enroll the baby late because Lisa would be out of town). Knowing that it was a daycare, why would you even bother breaking and entering? I don't remember if he knew Dan was a cop (and would therefore have guns which might actually be worth something) but if you're trying to score drug money, I'm pretty sure a daycare is the last place you'd go.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful By Domestic Gnome on March 5, 2013
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The author can, in fact, write - solid prose and good dialogue, but the characters and the plot are just out of synch. As well placing women and children in generally senseless jeopardy is a cheap plot device. The robbers are quite possibly the dopiest bunch of criminals ever - four of them and no one watches the hostages, sitting down in the basement drinking while the ringleader rants and raves and storms around the house venting his rage on only the one woman - who gets raped, beaten, stabbed, beaten, strangled, beaten and called a "b(tch" endlessly. As for the cops, they are way too savvy for rural Michigan.

Overall, just not quite right.

WARNING: A disproportionate number of 5-star reviews are from people who have only written only one review - this book. A number of other reviewers have 5 or fewer reviews to their credit. Caveat emptor and dropped from 2 stars to 1.

Update: been thinking about why I would pan a well-written book, and it came to me: the criminals in this book are relentlessly stupid - a collection of drunks, druggies, perverts, and pederasts who are stubbornly stupid. The cops are marginally brighter, but if I may speak for most readers of mysteries and thrillers, we like a struggle between "equals." The antagonist of this book is consistently dreadful and dim - a 3-time loser who stumbles into a burglary that turns into an assault that turns into rape that turns into a kidnapping and a sustained assault on the protagonist. There is not a flicker of intelligence (feral cunning is about it) and one is hardly treated to a war of wits. Wholly unsatisfying unless you happen to enjoy sustained sadism.

Pet peeve: with all of the available names for cities, the author chooses a nearly unpronounceable name for the city - a glitch that always throws me off and causes a stumble in the smooth flow of prose.
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