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Thunder Valley (Thunder Valley Trilogy Book 1) Kindle Edition

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Length: 216 pages Word Wise: Enabled
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  • File Size: 312 KB
  • Print Length: 216 pages
  • Publication Date: December 13, 2010
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B004GB0NLK
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Word Wise: Enabled
  • Lending: Enabled
  • Enhanced Typesetting: Not Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #20,543 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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Thomas Kelly lives near St. Paul Minnesota. A single father who makes a living as an Ironworker. Thomas has recently published several stories for the Kindle, Thunder Valley and Family Reunion.
When Thomas isn't writing stories he likes to spend his time with his kids.

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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful By Sirena on July 28, 2011
Format: Kindle Edition
Five young adults head to the remote woods for several days of drinking until they pass out, yelling, and annoying people around them. Really, what could go wrong?

This book is very poorly written. I finished it out of a strange fascination with how badly it was composed. The characters were completely superficial, and there were many sentences and entire paragraphs that made no sense. It reads as though it were written by a 17-year-old boy who flunked out of the 8th grade and never bothered to further his education.
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By devldggal on September 27, 2013
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The premise was awesome, but the product was painful. Poor sentence structure was the least of this author's problems. A potentially awesome plot line read like a B horror film script. The writing was hackneyed, at best, and a travesty at worst. While I applaud anyone brave enough to throw their hat in the ring of publishing, this was simply a poorly turned out effort in every aspect. It's tragic when the book's Amazon description is written at a higher level than the product.
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I really liked the premise of the story, I thought it would be a fun read. Based on the good review, it seemed like I was on the right track.

However, the writing, editing and formatting of this book were so poor I couldn't even read all of it. I skipped pages at a time just to find out what happens at the end.

Granted, there is a definite surprise ending. Great idea. Poor execution.
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By tom b on October 15, 2013
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Fun story....if you can muddle through the poor construction, weak character development, and lack of editing. Tried it by mistake but since it was free owed it to the author to push through. Sex scenes displayed more power than the rest of the book and made the story fun. Hats off to the author for the effort but the reader shouldn't have to work as hard as he did to get to the end.
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By Katy on August 16, 2011
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This book gave me new low standards on how badly a book can be written. I did not even make it through the first chapter because it felt as if I were reading a story written by a 3 year old! The grammar was atrocious and the plot itself was dull. This book has now become the worst book I have ever read- and I did not even finish reading it!
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By E. on June 26, 2012
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Thunder Valley has the proper elements to create an interesting read but much is lost to poor editing. The humor and sexual tension between a group of close friends creates a sense of realism but the lack of character development and painstakingly detailed descriptions of the setting leaves much to be desired.
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By Kayce on January 1, 2013
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This book physically hurt to read. It is just like every other book about idiots who think they are in love. No umphhh, just drinking, lots of drinking and terrible writing. I found myself slamming this book against my head several times in hopes that a better plot who form.
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By Jo on September 24, 2011
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I would not recommend this book to anyone. I think I kept reading to see if it got any better. The dialogue is poorly written to the point I believe the drunken characters wrote it. Dont waste your time!
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