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2.0 out of 5 stars
This book needed a good editor !, January 21, 2003
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This debut novel has a lot to recommend it, especially the characterization of its central character, Ann Whitehead, and the people she encounters while investigating the death of an unbalanced screenwriter-wannabe, but all the good stuff is lost in the too-busy plotting and redundant prose. Didn't anyone notice that Ann "runs" everywhere ? and that she continually asks herself a series of mental questions which seem intended to keep the plot twisting around itself. I think with judicious editing this could have been an outstanding debut, but as it is, its a bit of a mess.
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9 of 10 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Is there competition in the Ellroy house?, December 22, 2002
I am so excited with the surge of talented authors publishing in 2003 to compliment such greats like Lehane and Pelecanos all with new titles scheduled for release in spring and early summer. Among the lot I have read so far, and definitely will be on the list of Best of 2003 is The Ticket Out by Helen Knode of LA Weekly fame. The once alternative newspaper's movie critic turns out a stylish novel of crime that plays like a movie inside the mind's internal screen, very vivid images et al. The story opens with Ann Whitehead, movie critic for a counterculture newspaper restlessly watching a new "Hollywood Blockbuster" .starring a megastar that she has no interest in. She walks out, bored tired angry with the movies that are being made today, but worn Nordic beauty. An odd exchange takes place between them, leaving a strong impression with Ann. Later, Greta is found murdered in Ann's bathtub whilst Ann is asleep upstairs in the mansion. Her murder becomedisliki ng her job, In the same way Ann is meant to write her story, I believe this is the story Helen Knode was meant to write. It is a wonderful foundation upon which to build a fruitful lengthy career. Knode knows well the turf she speaks of and the roads of Los Angeles she travels down. She surrounds Ann with real flesh and blood both literally and figuratively, her family and friends, the LAPD and detectives, using the chase to catch the murderer to show Ann's growth. I personally enjoyed Knode's mention of my old alma mater, along with places I know & go, and enjoyed seeing them through Ann's eyes. This thriller has all the ingredients of an instant winner, among readers collectors and surely the Hollywood in-crowd, and without a doubt some producer will come knocking. This is another of those: DO NOT MENTION THE ENDING!! I am waiting to read whatever this woman writes next, with a secret hope there's more to The Ticket Out. And one more thing, Helen Knode doesn't need any help from her talented world -renowned husband James Ellroy for whom the work is dedicated. This novel is fabulous!
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6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Hoped for better, September 29, 2005
This review is from: The Ticket Out (Paperback)
As a fan of both mystery/crime fiction and movies/movie history, I had high hopes for this book, but must admit that I was quite disappointed. Unlike other reviewers, I didn't think it was too long; indeed, I felt it read quickly and really had me engrossed, waiting for a big payoff. Where I do agree with other reviewers, however, was on the ending: it was a complete headscratcher for me. Were we meant to be left believing that that the main character's father was somehow involved in the murders? I also agree that there were a few too many characters that didn't contribute meaningfully to the plot, e.g. Penny Proft, whose witty repartee (or what was supposed to be witty) really grated, and the LA cop wielding a rubber chicken for laughs when on duty. Some of the writing was too hyperbolic for me. Example: "I cried for the rest of the night. I cried when I was awake, and I cried in my sleep. I cried so hard in my sleep that I woke myself up again. I hurt my rib crying. I soaked the sheets and blankets crying, and soaked my pajamas crying. At one point I crawled off the couch to find a dry place to lie down." And one thing that really bothered me, given the 2001 setting of the action: Knode refers to a character dialing the phone, and going back and forth all night during the course of a party to use the phone. What Hollywood player wouldn't have a cellphone, to which one wouldn't need to walk back and forth? Having said all of this, if Knode delivers a sequel, I'll have to read it, if only to understand what happened at the end of this book
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