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1.0 out of 5 stars
HORRID PLOT, June 26, 2005
This review is from: Timeswept (Paperback)
This was the worst time-travel romance I have ever read in my life! The author gives clues early on as to what may happen, which would be good, and they don't. Throughout the book the plot does not seem well thought out and the story does not flow. There were noticeable grammatical and syntax errors, and the author is always writing about things that "had" happened, rather than speaking in plain past tense. I do not know why I finished reading this book, but when I did, the ending did not seem pulled together, the book seemed lacking from character development. The hero of the book brooded about something the entire book that was explained in one sentence in the end, the heroin was depressed in the last half of the book. Not how I like a heroin to be. Don't waste your time reading this book. It isn't worth your time.
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