16 of 19 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
USN LT Dan Lenson is UNBELIEVEABLE, August 13, 1999
I have read the other David Poyer novels featuring USN officer Dan Lenson. They are THE MED, THE GULF, THE CIRCLE and THE PASSAGE. I liked all of them because Poyer, a Naval Academy graduate writes well about men and the sea.
I had trouble with TOMAHAWK mainly because Poyer turns Lenson into (in my opinion) a very unbelieveable character. While I will grant the possibility of a career naval officer falling for a peace activist, I think the way Poyer writes about it is unrealistic and I think readers who buy the premise are simply naive romantics.
For those who have never served in the officer corps of any of the armed forces, let me say this. Dan Lenson's misgivings about the TOMAHAWK as a then new weapons system would have caused him a lot of trouble. Since the system gave him a moral dilemma, it follows that those doubts would reflect in his performance. The doubts did and his OER (Officer Efficiency Report) suffered.
To be sure, there is an incredible amount of waste in military procurement but, I really think that if LT Lenson had or developed moral qualms about the weapons systems the US Navy was seeking to develop and procure, he owed it to himself, his service and his nation to resign his commission and find another way to make a living. Most officers who leave the service do so for a variety of reasons. Some of them hate the OPSTEMPO, the deployments, separation from family, living conditions/low pay, etc. All of these are reasons retention of personnel in the military today is heading SOUTH!!!
I served on active duty and am now a member of the reserves and I found Dan Lenson unbelieveable in this book. If I served with a fellow officer like Dan Lenson, I would probably sit down with him and recommend that he find another career path because he was deliberately shooting himself in the foot. Well educated Annapolis grads like Dan Lenson don't do that. If they have a problem with the system, they make their recommendations for improvements; if they go unheeded, they either shut up and press on or they request a transfer. If the navy itself is what's getting to them, they generally put in their resignation papers and head off to greener pastures.
I just couldn't find any sympathy for Dan Lenson. If Poyer writes another Dan Lenson novel and I read that he has become an Admiral, I think I'll be sick. Dan Lenson is not Flag Officer material, not even with all the fictitious license in the world. The way it was written tells me that TOMAHAWK should probably be the last installment in the continuing saga of Dan Lenson, USN.
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5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
David Poyer turns left!, November 16, 2001
This review is from: Tomahawk (Dan Lenson Novels) (Mass Market Paperback)
"Tomahawk" was a major disappointment to this fan of the Dan Lenson series. "The Circle," "The Med," "The Passage," and "The Gulf" were outstanding and authentic, written with great skill by one who had "been there, done that." But it seems that Poyer underwent some sort of social/political rebirth just before writing "Tomahawk," for the book is filled with a boring mish-mash of alcoholism, girlfriend woes, and Lenson's highly unlikely involvement with a radical pack of peaceniks out to sabotage the development of the cruise missile. Too bad, for this could have been a fine tale if it had been crafted in the style of the previous four books in the Lenson series. If you subscribe to turn-the-other-cheek pacifist theories, you might like this novel. Otherwise, save you money and your disappointment--this is NOT the Dan Lenson you knew and loved in the previous stories.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Exciting military thriller, April 1, 1998
By A Customer
After three consecutive humdrum tours at sea, U.S. Navy Lieutenant Commander Dan Lenson has been assigned shore duty, working on the TOMAHAWK cruise missile project. While stationed in the DC area, the divorced Dan meets and falls in love with an anti-nuke activist, Kerry Donovan, who helps the career naval officer renews his flagging spirit and energy.
However, Dan's newborn enthusiasm for life is abruptly aborted when Kerry is murdered in what seems to be a senseless killing. As he tries to regain his equilibrium, he finds his loyalty questioned due to his association with Kerry. He knows that he must still adhere to his oath to serve his country while trying to ferret out the identity of his beloved's killer.
TOMAHAWK is an exciting military thriller that will be loved by fans of the sub-genre. Dan's agony while finding ecstasy feels genuine and turns the lead character into a human being the audience can identify with. The story line has a bit too much vernacular for us civilians, but remains fast-paced and fun to read. David Poyer shows much talent that will please those readers who enjoy a military thriller.
Harriet Klausner
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