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Interesting characters but perhaps a bit too much setup, May 27, 2008
This review is from: Tracing the Shadow (Alchymist's Legacy) (Hardcover)
The inquisitors have nearly eliminated the magi, but in doing so, they've created powerful enemies and paid a high price. Apprentice alchymist Rieuk is tempted by the spirits of the void, then blackmailed into becoming an agent for the unregulated magi. Jagu loses his friend to a soul stealer, and vows to join the fight against the magi--setting aside both his musical talent and swearing a vow of celibacy. Klervie, daughter of an alchymist, becomes homeless and orphaned when the inquisition sweeps up her father--but manages to keep a magical book containing a spirit with goals of its own. Each, seeking justice, salvation for their friends, or simple survival, becomes caught up in a greater adventure--an adventure they can see only a part of, and that sets them at odds with one another.
Klervie (later Celestine) is only six at the beginning of the story, and a large part of the novel consists of her growing up in a convent where she learns to sing. Gifted with exceptional talent by the spirit within her book, Celestine eventually is invited to the capital where she works with, and falls in love with, the nation's foremost composer. With this story serving as the main narrative thread, the wars, assassinations and political intrigues become undertones, largely hidden, but giving the novel structure.
Author Sara Ash does an intriguing job making Rieuk and Celestine both sympathetic. Although Rieuk is forced to commit horrible crimes, he does so under duress, and honestly tries to prevent the worst from happening (unfortunately, he's often frustrated in these attempts). Ash hints at some coming problems between Celestine and the spirit within her book--the spirit wants to protect Celestine, but she has her own agenda, an agenda that might not be compatible with Celestine's ambitions. Jagu remains a bit of an enigma, in love with Celestine, capable but not really passionate about his music, and uncertain about his calling as a soldier and warrior of the faith.
A lot of TRACING THE SHADOW reads like an introduction, setting up characters that will be fully developed in later volumes. Some of the emotions (Celestine's great love for Henri, Rieuk's passion for Imri) seem manipulated rather than justified by the events. Still, after a somewhat rough beginning, I found myself hooked on the story and compelled to see the adventure through.
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The Spirit of Saint Azilia, August 10, 2008
This review is from: Tracing the Shadow (Alchymist's Legacy) (Hardcover)
Tracing the Shadow (2006) is the first fantasy novel in the Alchymist's Legacy series. It is set in the same milieu as the Tears of Artamon series and includes some of the same characters and events. Still, it shows different viewpoints and other events during that period.
In this novel, Ruaud de Lamvaux is a Captain of Guerriers in the Francian Commanderie. He is bloody and exhausted from the final assault on the fabled citadel of Ondhessar, but he has his men raise the standard from the highest tower to show that the Commanderie is here to stay.
Lieutenant Konan finds one of the Erihirrans still alive. He asks permission to put the man out of his misery, but Ruaud stays his hand. They give the young warrior some water and he curses them for taking the fortress. Then he dies.
Konan discovers some kind of tribal marking on the corpse. Every body has the same marking on the left hand and the forehead. It appears to be the letter "A" in Old Enhirran script. Maybe it stands for Azilia, the Eternal Singer.
A trespasser enters the citadel and steals a jewel from the hand of the statue within the shrine to Saint Azilia. He is seen fleeing the shrine with the aethyr crystal and pursued by the Guerriers. But he reaches his craft and flies away from the pursuers.
Rieuk Mordiern is the apprentice of Magister Kaspar Linnaius. In his master's absence, Rieuk is cleaning the laboratory. He is intrigued by the Vox Aethyr being developed by his master and Herve de Maunoir, another achemist. He studies the quartz crystals in a tray by the device and notes a trace of resonance in the stones.
Alois Visant is the new Inquisitor for the Commanderie. He suspects the College of Thaumaturgy of being mages after learning of the flying craft of Magister Linnaius. With orders from the King, he leads a raid on the College.
Klervie is the child of Herve and Maela de Maunoir. She witnesses the escape of an aethyrial spirit from a crystal and its recapture within a book. Later she carries the book as she and her mother are turned out of their house by the Inquisition.
Jagu is a student in the Seminary of Saint Argantel. He is also a dedicated and talented organist. One day he meets Henri de Joyeuse and receives a promise of sponsorship at the conservatoire of music in Lutece.
In this story, Rieuk is soundly chastised and almost expelled for his rash experiments with the Vox Aethyr. He is away from the College retrieving new parts for the device when the Inquisition conducts its raid. He flees in the company of an Enhirran mage.
Rieuk is trained as a mage by an order in Enhirre. He learns many things and enjoys his time with mage Imri. Then he is ordered to assassinate Francian personages and begins to wonder whether he has been damned by his association with mages.
Magister Linnaius also avoids the Inquisitors. He flees to Tielen and becomes the Court Artificier for Prince Eugene. Yet he is still wanted by the Commanderie for magery; they hope to bring him to trial and then execute him by auto-de-fe.
Ruaud rescues Klervie from the streets of Lutece and persuades the Abbess of the Convent of Saint Azilia to take her into the orphanage. Upon her acceptance, Klervie is given a new name: Celestine. On her first day at the convent, she begins her training as a singer in the Skylark choir.
Ruaud also becomes the tutor and protector of the second son of the Francian king. He finds himself opposed to the intrigues of the queen and Grand Maistre Donatien of the Commanderie.
This tale brings Ruaud, Celestine and Jagu together in a secret group within the Commanderie. They defend Francia from enemies both foreign and domestic. Celestine and Jagu travel together as singer and accompanist to perform their tasks.
These adventures parallel the story in the previous trilogy, yet have very little overlap in the characters and plot. This story seems to be more interesting than the previous works, but that may be due to the familiarity of the milieu. Yet it could mean that the author has improved her writing skills.
Recommended for Ash fans and for anyone else who enjoys tales of exotic magic, similar societies, and a touch of romance.
-Arthur W. Jordin
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Treachery, Magic, Inquisition, Intrigue, Assassinations, Convent life and Music..., April 1, 2008
This review is from: Tracing the Shadow (Alchymist's Legacy) (Hardcover)
A series of events affecting kingdoms and individuals and god-like beings fall into place when the kingdom of Francia invades Enhirre and captures an ancient fortress that is sacred to Azilis, or Saint Azilia to the Francians. Captain Ruaud de Lanvaux, young and devoted officer of the Francian Commanderie is there when King Gobain's Alchemist, Linnaius, sneaks in to steal a crystal held by the statue of St. Azilia for the alchemical Vox Aethyria he's developing. Magister Linnaius's crystal is brought back to the College of Thaumaturgy at Karantec in Francia where alchemists hope the success of the Vox Aethyria, able to send and hear voices over distances, will ingratiate them with the King. Rieuk, Linnaius's much put-upon apprentice, has a way with crystals and thinks he can make the mysterious crystal work in the Vox Aethyria--unfortunately there is a strong spirit trapped in the crystal that he releases but cannot control. A young teacher at the college, Herve de Manoir, steps in and binds the spirit in a grimoire--a book given, in disguise, to his young daughter when the Inquisition comes to arrest everyone at the College. Only Linnaius escapes--to the Court of Francia's enemies in Tielen--who embrace the technology of the Vox Aethyria, and Rieuk the apprentice who was out on an errand and eventually falls into the company of a mysterious mage from Enhirre who promises to teach him how to use his powers.
The spirit of Azilis is with the young daughter of the collegian who was taken and burned to death by the Inquisition... Much of the story concerns her plight as her mother dies, leaving her to the streets, only to be rescued by the young Captain Ruaud and taken to a convent to be raised. And there's another main character, the young Jagu, who encounters the mage Rieuk at a seminary, where he is also rescued by Captain Ruaud.
There is a large cast of characters, but Celestine, Jagu, the Captain Ruaud and Rieuk are the main ones, with Riuek and his hidden mages pitted against the Francians. It's a bit disconcerting since Rieuk is not an unsympathetic character, so it's hard to know who to root for or against. The various lives of the characters are intriguing and varied--much of it focused on the young Celestine's convent upbringing and singing life, and Jagu's adventures at the seminary and beyond. Rieuk's bonding with the Shadowhawk was fascinating. I only put down the book once and read it nearly straight through. I'll be looking forward to the sequel.
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