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2.0 out of 5 stars
Not good enough, August 22, 2007
This review is from: Trenches (Paperback)
First of all, I give kudos to the author for attempting this graphic novel. He obviously did background research into WWI, and the story isn't a bad one.
That being said, I didn't like the book. I found it naive; the work of someone who just hasn't thought enough about the time period, or perhaps just didn't completely let his research and his creation of a fictional world 'jell' into something worthwhile. As to the research, and faithfulness or accuracy to the time period, there are some unfortunate lapses. Just for example, the author gave the name, Brianna, to one of the women characters. Well, who knows, maybe there were women named Brianna in 1914, but when I read it I thought, hmmm, a somewhat "modern" name to give a character from 1914-1918.
All the novel's characters are depicted shallowly. How can you care about these characters when you don't learn anything about them - they remain incomplete stick figures. Why was Davey such a s--t to his brother, Lloyd, all their lives? Why did Lloyd suck up his brother's brutality, ignorance and selfishness all the time? Why did Lloyd, after a lifetime of being ignored or brutalized by his older brother, let Davey talk him into enlisting in the first place? It's frustrating that these questions are not answered; that the reader is given no hint at the answers.
Then again, in another flawed character creation, Major Hemmingway, the brothers' commanding officer, is a stereotypical Col. Blimp, British officer-type; not unpleasant, just unoriginal. The incompleteness of the character is frustrating.
I mean, you have only to compare this graphic novel to Art Spiegelman's MAUS, and the quality of MAUS just shines more brightly. Now, MAUS is a fully realized war presentation; a character presentation, and a historic presentation (in the sense that everything depicted has accuracy or faithfulness to the time period). Scott Mills doesn't even get the tone of the times right --he doesn't depict the officer-class/lower-class separation that existed at the time. He has them all fraternizing and forming relationships that probably would not have existed, given the rigid class system in place during 1914-18. This broke down a bit during the awful experience of the trenches, and yes, the infantry and the officers did have mutual respect and even admiration for each other in many instances, especially since they were all undergoing the same horrible experience -- BUT -- in this story, the author seems to be filtering the 21st century while trying to depict the early 20th century (in some respects, still the 19th). Well, I can't put it into the right words, but the relationship that is depicted between the Allenby brothers and their major just didn't ring true.
Now, about the artwork. Everyone's idea of good art is so personal a choice, I hesitate to say this, but I found Scott Mills' artistic style unfinished and disjointed. The cover art is the clearest panel you'll see in this book, and the most stunningly drawn (for me it's a more accurate depiction of WWI than anything IN the covers, with the exception of some of the battle scenes). Mills' brush style, like the story, is blurry, unfinished, and again is just naive. I can't think of a better word to describe this author's art.
TRENCHES ultimately was a real disapointment to me, if you haven't already guessed. If only the author had been able to give his characters and their tale more realism; more depth, and been true to the historical period. Because to try to create a graphic novel about families and trench warfare in WWI is a noble and imaginative idea. It could have been spectacular, but TRENCHES isn't.
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