5.0 out of 5 stars
a matter of taste, December 20, 2006
everything the other reviewer didn't like, I did. the inner world of the characters is rich and interesting. yes, they do go on about not being married, but that's because it was a shoved in their faces all the time in the strange community they'd settled in.
Sure some of the story wasn't absolutely part of the plot, but it added to the portrait of the people. I even enjoyed the totally unnecessary description of a trainride to London.
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1.0 out of 5 stars
First in a series curse, February 2, 2006
This is the sort of book that makes me believe any "first in a series" book is bound to be overburdened with exposition, backstory and more backstory. Then I remember glorious examples like Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone and The Game of Kings and remember what a little restraint can do. A reader shouldn't be sick to death of the heroine and hero of a mystery novel let alone a series by chapter 3 but that's exactly where this one left me. Helen West comes across as a self-absorbed, self-satisfied jerk. Geoffrey Bailey fares slightly better though add in the wimp factor and he's similarly unwelcome by page 50 or so. The mystery itself is interesting enough and might have been quite good had the author spent more time on the victim, the suspect, their friends and family instead of droning on about Helen, her boyfriend (not her husband as we're told a dozen times per chapter!) and equally annoying policewoman Amanda.
None of the characters is particularly likable which makes for a tiring read. And they can barely tolerate each other. West and Bailey feel superior to the family that owns the pub. Bailey feels superior to his subordinate Amanda. West feels superior to pretty much everyone else in town and certainly to every established institution. And we're treated to a ringside seat on all this because West and Bailey's internal monologues fill page after page.
The ending, however, is what made me yearn to slap these two. An "innocent" is killed, a man was wrongly accused, someone is fired and lives are damaged all around. But despite escaping unharmed except for a dirty jacket, West and Bailey whine and whine and whine to themselves and each other. It's all about them. They feel guilty. They feel disillusioned. They are oppressed by life in the 'burbs. They need a new place to live.
They need to get a grip.
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