on May 27, 2012
Jill Gates writes great lesbian fiction. And I have praised her work in the past. (See reviews of "Late Night Roommates" and "Anal Desires".)
Unfortunately, the best feature of this work is the cover of a rearview of a hottie in a g-string. The plot is rather silly and the story ends abruptly, followed by promos for her other works as usual. This tends to piss people off when they buy a book and find out the 2nd half of it is all ads.
My advice to Jill: collect some of your tales in a single volume, or write a longer work. Screw this samples and ads strategy.