- File Size: 596 KB
- Print Length: 283 pages
- Publisher: Eternal Dreams; second edition (November 18, 2013)
- Publication Date: November 18, 2013
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B005LVV5LQ
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #809 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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The Tycoon's Revenge (Baby for the Billionaire, Book 1) Kindle Edition
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As an aspiring author, she wrote for years, then published in 2011, finding her true calling, and a love of writing nonstop. Holding a Bachelor's Degree in business, she loves to write about strong, powerful, businessmen and the corporate world.
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Top Customer Reviews
In my opinion, the writing was extremely amateurish; I felt like an 9th grade girl wrote it. It was HEAVY on description (and not very interesting description), so I found myself skipping several paragraphs at a time. I called it quits at about the half-way point, and deleted it from my Kindle. I only made it that far, because I'm the type to always finish a book, even when I don't really care for it. Unfortunately, I just wasn't invested in any of the characters, and was much too distracted by all of the errors to finish this one. So I guess I *almost* always finish a book.
The plot *could* show some promise, I suppose...but it would need a major rewrite.
The hero's feat of becoming a billionaire from nothing in 10 years is unlikely, not to mention his two cousins becoming just as rich.
His ferocious behaviour to the heroine is a total turn-off and her acceptance of his advances immediately she sees him suspends belief in view of how badly he treats her.
The writing is naive. Repetitious words and phrasing, awkward sentences and so many "...said" makes this book a hard read. A good editor should have sorted this out before publication.
If Mr. Freeman was the one to strip and sell companies ruining countless lives in the process that would have been a great motive for revenge and would have made sense. But no, that was Derek's job title and the revenge is because he got his feelings hurt "way back when" in high school and was not adult enough to get over it and move on. The story kept sliding down hill for me when he found out he was a father. I give it to him on wanting to be a dad and be apart of the child's life and all, but the youngster walks in on mom in bed with a stranger (at tender age of 10 years old) and is EXCITED because said stranger claims to be his long lost dad.
If Derek had taken 2 minutes to think 10 years ago about why Jasmine had hurt him he would have seen then what he had to figure out later.
I am well aware that fiction stories usually have some unbelievable storyline meant to transport you into a world of fantasy and fun but this was just bad. You could not get lost in the story because it seemed like a rush job.Read more ›
Most Recent Customer Reviews
Very nice read with good backstory between the 2 main characters. I loved that Jasmine stuck to her integrity.... though I'd hoped that she would've realized the obvious.Published 2 days ago by Giselle
Love this book! it has so many twists in my view! jasmine and derek are great characters and it has a great story line!Published 10 days ago by Tyler
Enjoyed the characters but wished more time had been spent on unravelling the misunderstanding. The past was forgiven entirely too easy by the FH and the MH suffered for like a... Read morePublished 14 days ago by P.R . Ashley
I truly loved this story. I laughed and I cried. I recommend it to anyone. It was a touching story.Published 14 days ago by Kindle Customer
The only issue I had with this book is there is a place in the book when she is referring to her son (who's name is Jacob) but it says Trevor.Published 15 days ago by michele harper