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7 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Personally, I liked this one., February 22, 2007
This review is from: Unforgiven (Silhouette Nocturne) (Mass Market Paperback)
Sniper Reno Manchahi lives each day for revenge. His wife and little girl were murdered. When he threatens the General responsible, he's put in jail with a twenty year sentence. Coming from Apache heritage, Reno is in touch with nature. When he hears a hawk cry out with a message of freedom he's not sure he can believe it.
That day he's made an offer. If he's willing to use his skills as a sniper for a special assignment, he will gain his freedom. He's asked to travel to Ecuador to dispose of El Espanto, a mysterious figure scaring the guards away from an emerald mine. The catch is that he can never return to the United States.
Calen Hernandez leads a double life. By day she's a billionaire in charge of an oil empire. By night she's El Espanto protecting the poor esmeraldos from the cruelty of the guards at the emerald mine. When Reno comes to town, she knows that he's the sniper brought in to kill her, but despite that she finds herself drawn to him.
Soon Reno and Calen find they have a common destiny. They are Warriors for the Light and they are called to a higher duty. They will fight with others like themselves to save the world.
Not only is UNFORGIVEN the first book in Silhouette's new Nocturne series, but it's the first in Lindsay McKenna's new Warriors for the Light trilogy. This book is a wonderful start to both series. Reno and Calen are both vulnerable and real. Right from the start you care about what happens to them. The tension between them keeps you going until they come together in a wonderfully emotional scene. I can't wait for the next book from Lindsay about the Warriors for the Light.
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10 of 13 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
If you want a Luna book, buy a Luna book..., October 12, 2006
This review is from: Unforgiven (Silhouette Nocturne) (Mass Market Paperback)
This is my second "novel" from Silhouette's new "Nocturne" division. So far, both books, written by well-known authors, have been disappointing. The plots, characters, even the number of pages (300 including advertisements), seems more than a little contrived. I can even imagine the publishers giving directions to the authors. "Give us a SF, fantasy, paranormal, less than three hundred pages. We don't care about the plot, we don't care if its good, it will sell. You've got the name, we've got the paper."
There was a void to be filled, and "Nocturne" sought to fill it. Like most readers of this genre, I wait with bated breath for another excellent Luna book to come out, and am desperate for a good fantasy read in between. The difference, and the reason we have to wait for Luna, is that they are not giving us fill, they are giving us substance. I'm all for handcuffing Robin Owens, Michelle Sagara and Sarah Zettel to their computers and forcing them to crank out more of their wonderful novels to satisfy my cravings, but good literature can't be rushed. I still want the good stuff, not this dreck.
What really hurts, is you know Lindsay McKenna can do better. The writing is professional, but you know, just by reading, this was not an honest effort. I'm not even sure if this was her storyline. It felt like an outline she filled in, after someone else gave her the plot. No heart, no soul, no life.
Nocturne, if you want to compete with Luna Books, you need to read a few, and see why readers are so captivated. As for me, I'm taking the rest of your collection off my wish list.
My fault. Fool me twice, shame on me...
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Uneven..., August 14, 2007
This review is from: Unforgiven (Silhouette Nocturne) (Mass Market Paperback)
Reno Manchahi is finally given his chance for freedom from a military prison. All he has to do is capture and kill El Espanto. El Espanto is a ghostly figure plaguing the wealthy emerald mine owned by the mysterious Guild. The guards of the mine are willing to kill any of the poor esmeraldos who enter their lands, searching for just one emerald to change their fortune. Reno thought the task of killing El Espanto would be an easy one, till he met the lovely Calen Hernandez. An ancient prophecy is about to unfold....
UNFORGIVEN is the first book in the Silhouette Nocturne line and the first book in Lindsay McKenna's Warriors of Light series. As such, it is an uneven start to both. The story starts off strong, with Reno forced to choose between freedom and his quest for revenge. Calen's role is also initially very well done, as both characters evoke strong emotions in the reader. The tension begins building up to what looks to be a fabulous showdown. Instead, however, the book veers off course. Instead of focusing on the story at hand, another ongoing plotline begins emerging about an ancient prophecy. The transition does not go seamlessly, and it almost feels as if two books have been fused together into one.
The ancient prophecy has a few unusual twists. The concept of the Warriors of Light offers some promise that will hopefully develop in future installments. UNFORGIVEN reaches a point where it becomes almost preachy about the entire philosophy of metaphysicians. Instead of showing the reader and using the world of the jaguar shape shifters to make her points, Lindsay McKenna instead devotes far too many pages to explaining the philosophy. Perhaps, as the series begins to coalesce around the thread of the ancient prophecy, the stories will improve.
COURTESY OF CK2S KWIPS AND KRITIQUES
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