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1.0 out of 5 stars
Bypass this series, November 24, 2010
This review is from: Very Much Alive: True Destiny, Book 1 (Kindle Edition)
I really looked forward to enjoying another one of Dana Marie Bells' book since reading all of the Halle Puma & Shifter series several times over because they were that good. Unfortunately, this book was a huge disappointment - I had to force myself to finish it. Many times I stopped reading, went on to another book that I actually enjoyed and then forced myself to go back to it with the hope that it would improve to only be more disappointed. I just could not get interested in the story or characters.
The main characters, Kiran and Logan are really the Norse Gods, Loki and Baldur. A major problem for me in the first half of the book was that I simply could not keep straight which character was which god and had what supernatural powers. I have read Federal Tax Laws that were clearer. While the Norse Gods concept was unique, it was also very confusing to the reader unless one was very knowledgeable about Norse mythology in the first place. The Norse mythology was also a little too much for such a short novel because it forced the author to find a way to introduce the different Norse Gods, their different powers and relationship to each other which just led to MAJOR bewilderment. Many times things were not clear until much later in the book when the reader was fed a little more background on the Norse mythology which then made a much prior passage make sense, somewhat, sometimes. The story might be interesting if reread after a "cheat sheet" concerning Norse mythology is made by the reader but quite frankly I still do not think I would be any more interested in the characters or story than I was the first time around.
As for the "hot sex" scenes that another reviewer mentioned - maybe explicit but that did not make them "hot". To me, the scenes were more of a "throw in" because that's what is expected in a book that is supposed to be an erotic romance and I had long stop caring whether there was any romance between the characters.
Note to Author: Please Dana - return back to the Halle Shifter series and let this series stay in the past like Norse mythology.
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9 of 10 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Very Much Alive, October 26, 2009
This review is from: Very Much Alive: True Destiny, Book 1 (Kindle Edition)
Living life on the run has become second nature for Kiran Tate and Logan Saeter. As the years go by the man they are running from, Oliver Grimm, gets closer and closer to catching and ultimately destroying them. Determined to end the battle between them and Grimm, Kiran and Logan search out Grimm's step - granddaughter and private eye Jordan Grey to help them. When they meet Jordan they find they have two tasks at hand; convincing her that they are Norse Gods on the run from Odin who was framing them for murder and who happens to be her step-grandfather but more importantly than that is convincing her that she belongs in their bed.
Jordan doesn't know what to make of the two gorgeous men that walked into her office, but from the moment she met them they turned her world upside down.
Very Much Alive is a very eclectic story, with gorgeous shapeshifting Norse Gods, hot sex and a plot that carries over centuries, but it wasn't enough to hold my interest. I found the characters to be very irritating especially Kir and Logan and Jordan's siblings. However I did like Jordan, she was the saving grace of this story. I think the author was going for quirky, tongue and cheek with this story but it didn't come across very well. Men shape shifting into cars to drive their lovers around just didn't work for me. Although Very Much Alive was not my cup of tea, it could be a fun story for others.
Ley
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Great character interaction, April 26, 2011
This review is from: Very Much Alive: True Destiny, Book 1 (Kindle Edition)
I do agree with another reviewer: if you aren't up on your Norse mythology, this book is hard to follow. There are a lot of characters crammed into a small space, and there's way too much assumed knowledge on the part of the author. That's the bad bit.
So why four stars? Because I found the interaction between the three main characters: Logan (Loki), Kir (Baldur), and Jordan to be just wonderful. Bell is great at creating distinct characters that shine through their actions. Paranormal romance is often bogged down with melodramatic dialogue. Bell's conversations are delightful--they are the kind of laughing interactions I have with my own friends (er, minus the sex). Additionally, there was a great sweetness to the romance that was a treat to read.
So here's my tip: if you want to really enjoy this book, read a quick primer on Norse mythology first. It will be worth it. I know I'll be reading up a little before the second installment.
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