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Warring States: A Jurisdiction Novel

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We have had some delays at the printer, which have been very frustrating for me, my editor at Meisha Merlin, and others who have been kind enough to take an interest in my novel.

The latest news is that the novel will ship from the printer to the distributor today (Tuesday, March 14th) and should begin to appear in stores and, I presume, Amazon.com, within a week to ten days. . . . Wish us luck.

Stephe (my editor) and I are both very sorry about the delay! We're looking forward to seeing the book in the pipeline soon!

I hope that you will decide that the wait has been worth it. I think it's a cracking novel, but my sense of proportion cannot be relied upon in this instance.

Thank you for your interest,

Susan R. Matthews

The Jurisdiction universe is one of the most fascinating ever created. This particular volume of it is as much murder mystery as science fiction - although I should warn you that the actual murder was in the previous volume in the series. You will definitely want to have read, at the very least, "The Devil and Deep Space" before reading this one, so order them both if you haven't read that one. Once you've read these two, you will be absolutely hooked and have to go back to the beginning, I promise. Because you'll want to know more - what was it that happened at Dommitt Prison? Who was Joslire, and what's the deal with the knives?

A review can't begin to convey the depth of complexity of this series, the details of the universe that Matthews has imagined. One senses that there are more stories on every single world, or for every single character. The Bench agents, for example - Jils Ivers and Karol Aphon Vogel - I'd like to know what else they've done. (Incidentally, if you play fast and loose with translations, Karol Aphon Vogel would come out as approximately "Silent Songbird." Isn't that interesting?)

Apart from bombs blowing things up, there's not as much violence in this volume as in previous volumes of the series; Andrej has indeed given up torture, and at the end of the book, we seem to be headed in a direction that will take him even further away from that. So, if you were reading this series because you were looking for the S-M overtones of the earlier volumes, this one might be a disappointment to you. But if you were reading it for plotting and for delving into character motivations, then this one is the best yet. We get a LOT more detail on Emandisan, Joslire's home world, and its culture, which is interesting enough to keep you reading until it's almost time to wake up the next day. (At least, that's what *I* did. Maybe you have more willpower.)

For those who are new to the series, some of the above may sound cryptic. As I said, it's a series where it's best to read all of it, and at the very least, read the previous volume before this one. This volume is not totally incomprehensible without that, but you would have a lot of unanswered questions in between the more satisfactory bits of plot and dialogue.

I've always figured that the Dolgorukij Combine was vaguely Polish. When we meet Padrake, another Bench agent, we get hints of a world or system that must have been founded by the Irish. In general, there's not much clue here at all as to how far from Earth we are, either in distance or in time - no Earth years are referred to, and certainly Earth is not anything important in the Jurisdiction area. But the hints of Irishness, added to other worlds with vaguely national characteristics, makes me want to know more about what other individual cultures are out there in the Jurisdiction, and in the area Beyond. I can't wait for the next volume!

I've been button-holing prospective readers for years, trying to explain to them what a mind-bogglingly fantastic writer Susan R. Matthews is, and what wonderful books her Jurisdiction novels are. Unfortunately, I am not nearly as talented, so I am not going to be up to the task. But I'm going to try anyway, starting with an overall explanation of what I enjoy about the whole series, followed by some specific Warring States praise.

First, Matthews never talks down to her readers. Her prose is rich, incorporating enough unusual grammar, syntax and unusual words to immerse us in a different place and time, and with just a deft sentence here and there, she introduces us to a myriad of different cultures and their complex problems. She dances lightly through the story, sprinkling it with references to traditional beliefs, religious systems, government and military systems in all their good, bad, mundane, honorable, corrupt, bureacratic, overburdened, human glory.

Secondly, her characters are never shallow, never completely good or evil, though their actions are frequently one or the other. Andrej Koscuisko, the main protagonist of most of the books, is a deeply flawed individual, shaped and bound by his culture and status, not to mention an unfortunate psychological quirk, but on a painful course of self-discovery and liberation.

Thirdly,(and this isn't all but I don't want to go on forever) the issues that Matthews tackles head on are both current and timeless. Where does power come from? What does it do to people? What happens when it's abused? Why is it abused? How are people to manage the difference between the Rule of Law and Justice?

Now for Warring States. It was good to see more about the workings of the Jurisdiction and the Bench Specialists. All our favorite characters were back and all busy either trying to keep anarchy from breaking out or to using the anarchy breaking out to try to correct injustices done under a brutally heavy-handed Bench. Jil Ivers, a Bench Specialist who has dedicated her life to the Rule of Law and who has sometimes been callous about collateral damage, is facing a chance of becoming a victim of the system herself if she can't find who killed Sindha Verlaine, her former boss. Andrej Koscuisko takes a bold step, breaking the law to do what he knows to be right, and in the end moving further down a hard road to redemption. There are new characters to enjoy as well. A female Malcontent Bench Specialist, Jils ex-lover, and the family of the late Joslire, who are determined to adopt Andrej into their family.

Susan Matthews, with her books about Inquisitor Andrej Koscuisko, has done that rarest of things: she has created a character completely unlike any other in contemporary science fiction. Nor do her secondary characters necessarily suffer in comparison, as everyone you meet in these novels has real depth and makes sense as a human being. Matthews also does something else I like, i.e. she never patronizes her readers. This series is compelling, intelligent, and utterly original.

The Jurisdiction universe is a vicious, unforgiving place to live, a place where torture is routine and the interplanetary government continues with its slow-motion campaign of genocide against the Nurail. Andrej, in spite of his authoritarian upbringing, has finally come to the realization that he doesn't have to play along with the system any longer. I expect to see him do real damage to Jurisdiction in future books, though we don't quite get to that here. I hope the next book comes out before too much time elapses....

The only criticism I have of the book is the method used to decide what happens with the Jurisdiction hierarchy now that the First Secretary is dead. There is just no way that the Judges (not to mention the various bureaucracies attached to the Judges) would allow the small group of Bench Specialists to decide their fate, no matter how smart and supposedly disinterested said Specialists may be. Powerful people don't become or remain powerful by handing over their destinies to people they can't control. And this universe is all about control, control, control. Fierce politicking and numerous assassinations, I could have believed.

That said, this book and this series are still much better than 95% of the science fiction out there right now. You won't regret adding this novel to your collection.

Perhaps looking forward to this book raised my expectations. I thought the previous two in this series were simply some of the best space opera combined with social commentary scifi available. This book simply does not deliver.

First, there are continuity errors. In one page of the novel, literally, one page, prepackaged meals are called 'prepacks'; in the rest, they're suddenly 'preheats'. Huh?

Second, she changes POV character waaaay too often. You can't even really call this a Koscuisko novel because he appears in less than half of the scenes, and is very rarely the POV character. I don't mind multiple POV novels, but someone as accomplished as Matthews should know that readers need some kind of clue at the beginning of a section as to who is narrating that section. Even just some geographical locator "on board _ragnarok_" or some such would have been an immense help. Half the time I had to go back after a page, when I'd figured out where and who 'we' were, to realign that information in my brain. Sometimes I had to stop in the middle of a section and wonder if she'd changed POV character on me or just got her pronouns confused (which she did, at least twice).

The whole novel has a sloppy feel to it. There's no compelling plot for Andrej; one never feels an awful lot of empathy for Ivers, and even though the surface plot tensions are resolved at the end, the internal problems for Andrej or Ivers are never resolved. And I don't mean 'unresolved' in a way that screams 'sequel'. She wraps everything up pretty tightly, so that I wouldn't be surprised if this is the last novel in the series--everyone's off to a Brave New World, inside the Judiciary or not, and hope is in the air, and.... all the loose ends are just oh so conveniently tied up. (Except the rioting and bombing and looting and why have a prologue in a place that's never EVER mentioned again in the novel?) It's a fuzzy and unfocussed novel that actually at times was a chore to read. I loved her other Andrej novels, but this...well, I wish I could go back in time to a week or so ago and still have hopeful expectations for this novel.

I think Matthews is taking the Conan Doyle approach and chucking Holmes off the cliff in a hope to be done with the whole mess. A shame, really.

In "Warring States", the latest in Susan R. Matthew's Judiciary series, Jurisdiction plummets towards chaos while the First Judge's seat remains empty. If Sindha Verlaine's killer could be found, the public's confidence in the Rule of Law could be restored, and it would be so easy to blame the Bench Specialist who discovered the body just to settle the issue. Will Jils Ivers discover the killer in time, or will a Convocation to decide a new First Judge be the perfect opportunity to improve another Bench Specialist's reputation? Perhaps the killer will prove to be a new Nurail war leader, eager to bring Feud to Chilleau Judiciary, or the Emandisan pilot with a claim for family honor against Chilleau? Can Ivers discern friend from foe before it's too late, or will the Second Judge throw her to that notorious pain master, Andrej Kosciusko, just to see what he can make of her?

Meanwhile, the notorious pain master is busy embellishing his reputation for anarchy. He has a plan that requires perfect execution, and the lives of his Bond Involuntary Security hang in the balance. Can he walk the knife's edge, or will the good intentions of a former commanding officer put the entire crew of the Ragnarok at risk?

Susan R. Matthews keeps the tension at almost intolerable levels. (Naturally, a set of clean whitessquares should be laid in before hand.) She still refuses to flinch from agonies of the heart and flesh, honor and duty. Her sterling prose continues to illuminate her characters in three dimensions, each one a carefully crafted individual, no matter how alien his name or grammar. The reader can smell the dust of Emandis, feel the luxury of a first class ground car, taste the decadent victuals. This isn't merely roaring fun SF; it's amazing Literature, down to the final page.

You've been warned.

The eagerly awaited next installment of The Life & Hard Times of Andrej Koscuisko is here! All major points having been covered in previous reviews, I'll just add my opinion that Susan has done it again. Our beloved favorite characters are all here (even Joslire through his family), including cameos from those we might have forgotten about. The emotions run just as high or higher than in previous books, despite the reformation of certain characters. Hints of what is yet to happen in this universe will keep you checking to see when the next novel is scheduled for release.

I will reiterate the warnings of previous posts, however. This is a volume of a series, so it's best to begin at the beginning with Exchange of Hostages. Otherwise, some of the shocking page-turners in this book just aren't as shocking.

This long-awaited installment in the Life and Hard Times of Andrej Kosciusko is a worthy continuation in the series. When we left Andrej and company at the end of Devil and Deep Space, he had rejoined a ship in a state of mutiny. Now, in Warring States, we find out what happens next. Andrej's plot focuses on his efforts to free his Security troops, while an engaging subplot follows Jils Ivers as she works with her fellow Bench Specialists to choose a new First Judge and, incidentally, figure out who's trying to kill her. Full of references to, and cameo appearances of, events and characters from the rest of the series, this book is perhaps not the best place for a new reader to start--but nexr fear, Matthews' new publisher, Meisha Merlin, is planning a re-release of the first three books in the series in the near future.

With this new installment of the series, Matthews brings back everything the reader enjoyed about the first few novels and crammed them all into one amazing page turner. The Malcontent's wacky antics, political intrigue, much ado about our favourite Bonds, and more Andrej angst. There was only one scene that I thought could have used more explaination and discussion, but other than that, Warring States is my favourite of the series. Keep it up, Susan! :)

In this book, our understanding of Jurisdiction as a whole expands as Bench Specialists from each judiciary haggle over who should be the next First Judge. Their arguments not only flesh out the social issues that define "civilized space", but they also introduce some new characters that are intriguing (I want to see more of Rafe in the future). Once again, Susan Matthews has done a masterful job of interweaving points of conflict and points of view, balancing characters who are trying to save Jurisdiction as a whole, with characters who are just trying to save themselves or those they care about.

Watch for a few beautiful moments where Ms. Matthews introduces a touch of mystery (think along the lines of the fog in Prisoner of Conscience). You will also enjoy the development of Rukota's character, not to mention one really great scene between Andrej Kosciusko and Serge of Wheatfields. Also, this books gets into the head of Jil Ivers more, and we learn quite a bit about how her mind works. I especially enjoyed the process of thinking that led to her sudden realization of a couple of home truths.

For those who's main interest in reading her books is to get into the head of Andrej Kosciusko (and that's probably 90% of us), you will not be disappointed in what you find there. Andrej remains a tortured soul (as he would admit is "just and judicious") but he is vastly more dangerous than in any of the books to date. He has shaken himself loose of many of the external expectations he once accepted as limits to his actions, and without those external limits - watch out. He is truly capable of anything.

The closing of this book is perfect, and will keep followers of Susan Matthews, and Andrej Kosciusko, waiting eagerly in line for the next installment. Please let it be soon!