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4.0 out of 5 stars
a great read., June 11, 2011
This review is from: Watcher's Web (Kindle Edition)
The first thing that I noticed about this book, and really appreciated, was the strong Australian voice of the character. It's been awhile since I have read anything that is set, even just initially, in a country other than America or an American copy. So it was refreshing, and enjoyable to see an Australian author making the most of their country of origin.
Jessica very quickly gets uprooted, and the reader gets to experience a whole new world through her eyes. She is thrown into the middle of things she struggles to understand and Jansen does a stellar job of getting the reader caught up in this.
I have to say that this is the first book I've read in awhile that has aliens who actually seem alien. Sci-fi in general is peppered with species and races which are all too human - and I can understand that, on some levels. Writers want to make sure that the readers can relate to the characters in their book - but aliens should be different to us. Jessica gets to explore this, to learn more about these alien creatures, and herself in the process. Jansen has done a fantastic job of creating a world that is alien, and yet still approachable for the reader.
The story line is evenly paced and while we try, along with Jessica, to grasp at all the strands, Jansen brings it all together with verve. Jessica manages to stay true to herself, while also letting the barriers slide so that she can interact with those around her. There is a lot of action, and excitement, and I loved watching the development of Jessica throughout, as she begins to open up to others and connect with the world around her, which also means she gets to grips with her strange talent and mysterious history.
If I had one gripe, it would be with the way the romantic subplots were tied up. Where Jessica felt like a strong character who always followed her own mind in the rest of the novel, she seemed less in charge when it came to love, and the resolution felt more like her accepting the hand that life had dealt her, rather than a choice about what she really wanted. That said, it was clear throughout the novel that Jessica was something of a novice when it came to relationships of any kind, so perhaps her actions are fitting.
All in all, I really enjoyed this novel. It was refreshing and vibrant. I love the cultures and characters that Jansen has created; it felt like there was a lot of depth to them, a richness which helped bring the story to life. I'd recommend this book to just about anyone, but in particular to writers who want a great example of how to create rich cultures/worlds, without drowning the reader in too much information. I'll be checking out Patty's next release, as I am sure that will be a good one too!
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Enjoyable, though somewhat jarring., December 7, 2011
This review is from: Watcher's Web (Kindle Edition)
This story is relatively short- I managed to read it in a few hours, and for the most part it was an easy read. However, due to the short length, sometimes things didn't go into enough depth and I found myself having to backtrack and search for the significance of certain things or names. Some details were glossed over, and the story itself could use a little polishing to fix some typos and encourage the flow.
The story itself was very enjoyable, with enough of a proper 'alien' sense to grant a plausibility. However, some of the themes were quite confronting and handled in a rather crude way- in particular, the swearing in places detracted from the story, rather than hinted at emotion. The references to physical intimacy could also have been handled in a more delicate way- some of the phrases were uncomfortable, and though the story is probably more appropriate to a teenaged reader, the relationships within the book are confronting.
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