A heroic fantasy relating the tale of a potter's son who rises to become a king's Grand Wizard.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Good story, terrible editing!,
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This review is from: When the Gods Slept: The Timuras Trilogy, Book 1 (Mass Market Paperback)
An interesting tale of a set of unlikely friends. The plot is captivating and the characters have enough depth for you to understand them and have a sense of how they think and act. A little more depth in describing the world itself would have been appreciated as I still don't feel as if I know it.While the story was entertaining, the lack of any editing was very distracting. While there are many examples, I will share only one from page 352 (chapter 22): "Your new title comes flows smoothly to my lips, sir. And I must say it fits very you very well." I am half way through the second book in the series, and it seems to have been edited, so it is much easier on my pedantic eyes. All said, a good story that I am looking forward to finishing.
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Skip it,
This review is from: When the Gods Slept: The Timuras Trilogy, Book 1 (Mass Market Paperback)
I found this book to be filled with promise that fizzles out at the end. My first quibble with the book is the editing. I know the other reviews have mentioned this issue but it really is distracting. When you get at least, and I may be consevative on this estimate, 50+ typos in a book it's a real problem. It nudges the reader out of the story and ruins the flow. The characters were too formulaic for my tastes. There were no surprises. Each character seemed to act according to script, a very predictable script. This led to very few surprises at the end of the book.
3 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Wish I could give half stars really,
This review is from: When the Gods Slept: The Timuras Trilogy, Book 1 (Mass Market Paperback)
Wow really nice, I was totally entranced by the story. And unlike the more cheesy entries in Fantasy in which the endings are all peachy and everyone is happy, this story actually contains moral dilemma! Anyways, not the best review, I know, but I just really enjoyed the story. The author does a great job of painting a believable world, and humorous characters I can care about. The only issue I have is with the atrocious editing. The book is sprinkled with sentences which make no sense whatsoever, and you have to stop and try and puzzle out what Allan Cole is really trying to say.... Still it was a great read and I'm looking forward to diving into book 2!
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