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on October 31, 2009
This is quite possibly the worst book I have ever read. I have read short stories by high school students that were far superior to this. If this were a 10th grade writing assignment, I'd give it a "B". There is no plot development, no mystery, no originality. Even the title has been used several times. I cannot imagine a publisher ever accepting this novella for publication. The story is shallow and the dialogue is downright comical in most places. Does anybody really talk like this??
My only comfort is that I downloaded it free on Kindle so I'm only out an hour or so of time. I'm not sure, though, that I'll ever recover from some of the sappy dialogue in this book.