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10 of 11 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Disappointed, July 13, 2006
I agree with all the disappointed reviews of this book. I've collected this series and, at this point, I'm seriously considering giving up the books. I have the hardcover and the synopsis of the book on the DJ isn't even correct! What about the skeleton? What on earth did Robert and Lily have to do with discovering the murderer? How did the killer have plans for Grace & Favor????? (I don't know WHERE that particular comment came from!)
The writing really IS terrible. I felt like the author was bored half the time she was writing. In a way, I was. There was no romance, no real danger, no real mystery--just the day-to-day happenings of silly Robert (who does come off as a rather weak character). The sentences were short, choppy and just stated facts. The story was still somewhat interesting. I suppose that's because I've been interested in the characters. I'm just sad because this series showed such promise; I loved the historical stuff. None of that in this one. (Oh--maybe that's where the skeleton came in????)
Spoiler coming....
I was SO GLAD Robert changed the name of the mailing facility! That was almost too much for me when it was going to be named after him. And the killer's explanation of why he replaced the paint can. Oh my word! Sure, I hadn't thought of that explanation myself, but it was so incredibly simplistic. I know that, figuratively, my jaw dropped.
I like Police Chief Walker and I like the new deputy. But I was surprised at how little Lily and Jack Summer figured in this story and at how silly Robert appeared. I felt sorry for him.
I still can't believe the skeleton part wasn't "resolved". Not that it needed to be--but the book gave the impression it was supposed to be related. How weird. And how disappointing.
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8 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Reads Like a High School Assignment, March 9, 2006
I have been a Grace & Favor fan from the series start, and was thrilled to see this new book on the shelves. That thrill didn't last. The series is supposed to be of a simplier time, but this story's dialogue is painfully simplistic while the plot is confused, disjointed, and a bit farfetched. What was the significance of the skeleton under the bush?-I didn't see any. What part did Robert and Lily (the central figures of Grace and Favor) contribute to the conclusion of the story?-I saw none. And what of the books in the library?-I don't believe it.
As I forced myself to finish the book I had the distinct feeling that the author had an assignment (was under contract) to write about 250 pages and the content was not necessarily important. So like many of us did while in high school, she wrote a lower quality story, but satisfied the assignment by achieving the required story length. I've never expected this genre of novel to be Pulitzer-qualifying, but I expect to be entertained.
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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
A children's book?, February 8, 2007
I've read one other Churchill book, but was willing to give this one a go. It was light, and charming, but, I just don't get it. The style of the writing, with the repitition of main plot themes over and over; it just seemed either the author thought we needed to be retold a story over and over, or she just ran out of things to write.
Let me give an example. Early in the book we learn that 3 "biddies" were going through the mail, and they wanted to prevent certain letters from being delivered. As the plot progressed, the protagonist felt it was important to tell others about what happened. Follow me so far? Now, in most books, the author would have written "...and he told them about the incident he saw with the mail," but this author has him repeat the same story with the same details to each person he sees. And WE, poor readers, have to hear it all over again. Likewise for other important "clues," they are repeated in detail over and over again as if the reader is a child, and needs to be reminded of these not-very-complicated plot developments.
The mystery itself was mundane, and there is a whole "subplot" of burying up some bones that is not at all relevent to the book.
Nice sense of life during the depression era, though. And charming (although 1 dimentional) characters
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