27 of 29 people found the following review helpful:
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Truly Disgusting, October 18, 2009
This review is from: The Woman Who Would Be Pharaoh: A Novel of Ancient Egypt (Hardcover)
I am appalled by this book. I have never in all my years read a book so distasteful. I want to warn anyone who thinks this is a historical fiction book. I think it should be sold as erotica or in that category. I am not saying it doesn't have historical facts, however it has incest and so many sex scenes in it that it takes away from the historic value. The worst part is the copulating dwarfs and the very explicit description of the male dwarf's genitals. ( I have to wonder what the author was aiming for there.. wishful thinking on his part or something else?) The treachery of these people is unreal. The women are all harlots at one time or another. This could have been a good book. It has suspense, a love story, and history. Too bad it had to be ruined the way it was. The Harlequin romance novels are called smut. I have news for those that think that. The romance in those novels are done very tastefully compared to this book. I read all most every page, I skipped a few towards the end.
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16 of 17 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Simply awful, October 28, 2009
This review is from: The Woman Who Would Be Pharaoh: A Novel of Ancient Egypt (Hardcover)
As far as I was able to gather (I made it to page 110), this story is about Princess Ankhesenpaaten who at fifteen is set to marry nine-year-old Pharaoh to be Tutankhamen. According to the book jacket, she is eventually widowed there is a big power struggle with lots of nasty deeds and family treachery. In the first pages, the Princess is more interested in men, sex and drinking at the local tavern - she escapes from the Royal Palace and meets up with the young set (I am not kidding) and heads for the local tavern and gets royally soused and does the hurdy gurdy in front of everyone (no, I am not kidding) and incites the men to drool after her. There is then some kind of attempt on her life and our intrepid hero saves her and voila (!!) they end up at some lake or river and do the nasty and presto-chango, they're madly in love and our snotty child abusing heroine (more on that shortly) is the sweetest thing since honey on bread. And I'll buy that bridge in Brooklyn.....
As if bad writing and lack of continuity in a storyline wasn't enough to send the book flying the copulating dwarfs most certainly did - let alone what our Royal Princess did to young Tut (remember now he's just nine) when she and her handmaidens attacked him in the bedroom and raised his night shirt......
Sorry but this is Amazon so I can't quote it here but it is truly disgusting and unless there is some historical basis that this princess went around molesting young boys I can't see any reason for it other than a feeble attempt to titillate the audience. Eeew, eeew, eeew. Get it from the library if you must, I'm glad I did. I must go and wash my brain out thoroughly with soap and water. This book deserves no stars and is a serious waste of a tree.
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26 of 31 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
I Am Shocked!, August 27, 2009
This review is from: The Woman Who Would Be Pharaoh: A Novel of Ancient Egypt (Hardcover)
This is going to appear out of place among all these 5 stars reviews, I know, and I am seriously questioning whether we all read the same book. There are some things in this novel that I feel some readers may want to be warned about.
First of all, the story is about Tutankhamun's widow (and if one does their research, it is said she is also his half sister as well as Nefertiti's daughter) , Ankhesenpaaten and her struggle to retain her throne against her aunt, Mutnedjmet (Nefertiti's sister). There is court drama and intrigue as each woman tries to "one up" the other. A "cat fight" so to speak. They each have their allies, and unfortunately, they both sleep with their allies.
Both women are portrayed as very "loose." In the first 50 pages alone, Ankhesenpaaten does nothing but party, drink, make fun of her future husband's sex organ, and throw herself at a complete stranger. Mutnedjmet, tho older, is not much better as she crawls in bed with a priest of Amun, Simut.
When copulating dwarves entered the picture (they literally copulated for people's entertainment at a party) that was it for me.
Also of note is some rather odd phrases that I think could have been reworded. When Simut is thinking to himself about a recent conversation he had with Mutnedjmet, I quote, "He had gained a powerful ally, and she could pee all over him for all he cared."
I was under the impression this was a historical fiction novel, not erotic. It will not be for everyone. I recommend
Nefertiti: A Novel for a historical novel that takes place in same time. It is from the viewpoint of Mutnedjmet and it manages to have scandal and history both, but with more likeable ladies.
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