7 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Average at best, October 16, 2005
I came across this book while searching for other some other fantasy genre books. I figured I would give it a chance as the back of the book sounded interesting. To start with, this book is really nothing different than what is already out there. The basic premise is a messenger of an evil god has come to the north and united the barbarian tribes to attack the kingdoms. One person, a 14 year old prince is the `chosen' one and he is the only one that can kill the messenger. The plot is rather cliché and straightforward.
As I said above the plot is riddled with cliché after cliché and so straightforward there is almost very little deviation from that straight-lined plot. This is not to say the story isn't a little interesting, but in a book that relies heavily on clichés I would have liked to see more twists and sub-plots within this book. I would be willing to bet that fans who have read a lot of fantasy books can read the back of the book and with a good amount of accuracy predict what will happen in this book.
The characters are nothing special either. The author tries at a minor character plot twist towards the end of the book but it is so melodramatic that it just doesn't matter; it has no effect of the feeling of the book at all. In my opinion there are only two interesting characters in this book. The main hero, Kedryn is a decent character - that of the 14 year old chosen one. The other interesting character is Tepshen Lahl who is basically a weapon master from another realm for the prince and his family, sort of like a glorified bodyguard if you will. Yet, even with how interesting he is, he is often overlooked in scenes and big segments of the book. It was almost like the author said "Oh, he's here he better make an appearance." I think this character was wasted in this book.
Another problem with this book is two-fold. The author does a rather poor job at describing the setting that the characters find themselves in, then suddenly he switched paradigms and has a very good description of something. He does not stay consistent with his process. Lastly, this book suffers at times with the show me don't tell me syndrome. At times the author tries to convey his point by telling the reader what is going on instead of allowing the reader to `see' the scene.
In all my reviews I try to either recommend or not recommend others to read this book. This is hard for me to do with this book. While there are certainly things with this book that detract from it being a good book, I can also see where others may enjoy it. In the end I think this is a personal decision. If you are looking for a book that will kill some time and not force you to exert yourself in the least while you are reading it, this may be the book for you. If however, you like fantasy books with a few plot twists and more depth (both in characters and plot) this book may not be for you. At best this is a fair attempt at a fantasy book. I am still unsure if I will continue on with this series or not.
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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Something new, yet familiar., July 6, 2000
Everyone has had one at one point in their reading life. A dry spell. A point in which you have read everything by your favorite authors and none of them seems pressured to publish anything new.
That's what was happening when I found this book. I hate having to try out new authors, but desperate to quench my thirst I starting reading Angus Wells series. After a while I found myself wondering what was going to happen in the next chapter and actually skipping a few chapters ahead to see what happened with particular characters. This book and it's series is new but it gives off a familiar feel. The author has created strong likable characters and an interesting plot.
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6 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Classical fantasy!, October 3, 1999
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Highly recommended to everyone who longs for the good old days of fantasy writing! Great plot, great writing, and a smooth read throughout the book.
Unlike much of the writing just mass produced these days, Angus Wells actually has spent time to sit down and create a true diamond in the rough that shines!
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