Heroes Arise (Paperback)

~ (Author), Jasmine Nakagawa (Illustrator)

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In a world where justice is achieved through careful customs of vengeance . . . a noble kren named Gundack joins with the enigmatic human Rheemar in a quest for love, honor and redemption.

Read what reviewers are writing about HEROES ARISE:

"HEROES ARISE by Laurel Anne Hill is a surprisingly exciting and moving story that gripped my attention from the first word and wouldn't let me put it down. This author's first work shows a strong talent and a remarkable future." --Jean Auel, Author of The Clan of the Cave Bear

"I enjoyed reading HEROES ARISE very much . . . how a culture lives by rules of retribution or trust is revealed in the pressure of one tense scene after another, and the narrative of Gundack and Rheemar flies along. --Kim Stanley Robinson, Hugo and Nebula Award-winning author of "The Science in the Capital" series

“Heroes Arise provides a fascinating journey into an alien culture, one more open and honorable than our own—although like ours in its capacity for violence. As I read, I was reminded of classic tales by Leigh Brackett and C. L. Moore, yet the story has a modern sensibility and depth of characterization. A promising debut for Laurel Anne Hill.” --Madeline Howard, Author of The Hidden Star

“In Heroes Arise, Hill has created a rich, fully-realized fantasy world with a wonderfully textured background—mythology, history, tribal customs—and then stripped it of all pretense to give the reader a sleek, fast-paced adventure story.” --Michael D. Pederson, Publisher/Editor, Nth Degree

“A richly detailed world, fascinating characters, and a stirring quest all make for an auspicious debut from and exciting new talent.” --Robert J. Sawyer, Hugo Award-winning author of Hominids


--This text refers to the Kindle Edition edition.

Product Details

• Paperback: 198 pages
• Publisher: Komenar Publishing (August 1, 2008)
• Language: English
• ISBN-10: 097720815X
• ISBN-13: 978-0977208159
• Product Dimensions: 8.8 x 5.9 x 1 inches
• Shipping Weight: 12.8 ounces (View shipping rates and policies)
• Average Customer Review: 4.0 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (3 customer reviews)
• Amazon.com Sales Rank: #986,290 in Books (See Bestsellers in Books)

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3.0 out of 5 stars Heroes Arise, September 30, 2008

By	H. Grove "owling6683" (Maryland, USA) - See all my reviews (TOP 100 REVIEWER)    (REAL NAME)

This review is from: Heroes Arise (Hardcover)

The world-building in this book is pretty darn cool. The entire tale is told slowly, moment to moment, in a way that focuses on the world, races, and traditions rather than the plot. In some ways this is good; the unusual biology elements, for example, can be pretty fascinating. However, at times it feels rather over-done, as if the author is trying a bit too hard to construct the perfect, seamless world for the reader.

There are also details here and there that stand out as beginner mistakes: far too many bad guys like to say "prepare to die!" while attacking; it was hard to read the name "Gundack" over and over without giggling a bit; and some phrases evoked unfortunate images ("Father Sun spread his pink and lavender robe wide"---it's unfortunate when you're left picturing the sun god as a flasher!). Gundack's constant changing his mind over Rheemar's loyalties was also incredibly annoying and repetitive---it seemed that it would have made far more sense for him to reserve judgment or gradually make up his mind rather than continually change his opinion back and forth.

There's definitely a highly unusual talent at work here with regards to the world-building and the unusual ecology and biology elements. However, some additional polishing would help to take further books to the next level of enjoyment. I often found myself simultaneously having difficulty putting this book down, while yet frowning over things that just struck me a little... wrong.

4.0 out of 5 stars Engrossing World-Building for YAs, November 9, 2009

By	Kaolin Fire "GUD Magazine" (Acton, CA USA) - See all my reviews (REAL NAME)

In her debut novel, Laurel Anne Hill explores young adult fiction of the fantasy genre. She creates a world where savagery and revenge are commonplace, and where the Kren (who seem to be a lizard or reptilian-like tribe) are nomadic warriors who wander in the desert, trading, while protecting their customs and mythology from outsiders.

The protagonist, Gundack, is a tribal leader whose wife has been murdered by the Tarr, a splinter group of Kren who are a mountain-dwelling people. According to the customs of his people--and to defend his honor, so he may marry Eutoebi, a fellow tribeswoman--he must seek revenge.

Along the way, Gundack meets a human, Rheemar, who is searching for her sister who has been stolen by the Tarr. Thus is formed an unlikely, and tentative, alliance. Rheemar seems to know many mysterious things about the Tarr that enable her to assist Gundack in fulfilling his quest, while simultaneously providing herself with the muscle with which she hopes to fulfill her own.

In the end, all are challenged to review deeply-held beliefs, not only about each other, but also about their own individual cultures, as well as what defines a true 'hero'.

Hill is very adept at building the world of the Kren; the reader gets a sense of how the people live, including what they eat and what they worship. She gives the Kren an honor code that is unmatched by anything human, and a thirst for vengence that would give pride to any warrior culture. Because she chooses to unveil these details in a slow manner, the world is seemingly built around you as the narrative grows. I'm not a huge Fantasy fan, but I found the world Hill created engrossing.

The action in this book is well-written and fast-paced. The escalation from scene to scene develops smoothly and seamlessly, Some of the dialogue is a bit repetitive and stilted, and, well, somewhat corny. Dialogue is often the most difficult bit for a writer to master, and so I believe Hill will likely refine her technique in future novels. Also, some of the back-and-forth between the two main characters seemed repetitive and unnecessary. Gundack questioning Rheemar once or twice would have made sense, but more than that seemed overdone.

As a side note, I found the illustration a bit boring and unnecessary. I could have easily done without it, and found it distracting as opposed to enhancing. However, I am the type of reader who prefers to imagine these things in my mind; I know a lot of young adult readers do enjoy a bit of illustration to go along with the story, so I have mixed feelings about it overall.

All in all, a decent effort, if a bit hampered by some beginners' mistakes. I believe readers will enjoy the world Hill has created, as well as the exciting battle scenes.

In her debut novel, Laurel Anne Hill explores young adult fiction of the fantasy genre. She creates a world where savagery and revenge are commonplace, and where the Kren (who seem to be a lizard or reptilian-like tribe) are nomadic warriors who wander in the desert, trading, while protecting their customs and mythology from outsiders.

The protagonist, Gundack, is a tribal leader whose wife has been murdered by the Tarr, a splinter group of Kren who are a mountain-dwelling people. According to the customs of his people--and to defend his honor, so he may marry Eutoebi, a fellow tribeswoman--he must seek revenge.

Along the way, Gundack meets a human, Rheemar, who is searching for her sister who has been stolen by the Tarr. Thus is formed an unlikely, and tentative, alliance. Rheemar seems to know many mysterious things about the Tarr that enable her to assist Gundack in fulfilling his quest, while simultaneously providing herself with the muscle with which she hopes to fulfill her own.

In the end, all are challenged to review deeply-held beliefs, not only about each other, but also about their own individual cultures, as well as what defines a true 'hero'.

Hill is very adept at building the world of the Kren; the reader gets a sense of how the people live, including what they eat and what they worship. She gives the Kren an honor code that is unmatched by anything human, and a thirst for vengence that would give pride to any warrior culture. Because she chooses to unveil these details in a slow manner, the world is seemingly built around you as the narrative grows. I'm not a huge Fantasy fan, but I found the world Hill created engrossing.

The action in this book is well-written and fast-paced. The escalation from scene to scene develops smoothly and seamlessly, Some of the dialogue is a bit repetitive and stilted, and, well, somewhat corny. Dialogue is often the most difficult bit for a writer to master, and so I believe Hill will likely refine her technique in future novels. Also, some of the back-and-forth between the two main characters seemed repetitive and unnecessary. Gundack questioning Rheemar once or twice would have made sense, but more than that seemed overdone.

As a side note, I found the illustration a bit boring and unnecessary. I could have easily done without it, and found it distracting as opposed to enhancing. However, I am the type of reader who prefers to imagine these things in my mind; I know a lot of young adult readers do enjoy a bit of illustration to go along with the story, so I have mixed feelings about it overall.

[Review written by Abigail Mouat for GUD Magazine]

5.0 out of 5 stars A Gripping Adventure with a Twist., March 29, 2009

By	Teresa LeYung Ryan "author of Love Made Of Heart" (California, USA) - See all my reviews

"Laurel Anne Hill's language is both exquisite and sharp. In HEROES ARISE, she transported me to distant time, space, and culture, yet the emotional impact hit home. A gripping adventure with a twist."
Teresa LeYung Ryan http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/