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Taking Over, an Amazon Short
by Dylan Otto Krider (Author)
4.9 out of 5 stars  (22 customer reviews)

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Length:  15 words, 8 pages
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manuscript review by Publishers Weekly, an independent organization
This book takes off - quite literally - when Jamie's high school friend Wilbur, just back from a tour of duty in Iraq, "borrows" his dad's Cessna to show Jamie a tiny island just off the Florida coast. Wilbur (now sporting muscles and tattoos and calling himself "Will") has brought along a duffle bag (possibly full of guns,) and reveals that, using skills honed as a member of the elite Special Forces, he plans to invade a similar nearby island and invites Jamie to come along. The book captures the enthusiastic, not particularly rational, thinking that propels the two young men to stage an actual invasion: Wilbur, humorless, obsessive and determined; Jamie, bright but without a world view to anchor him to the reality. Will transfers his energies from the Special Forces to his new invasion plan, recruiting his assault team from a loosely knit brotherhood of paranoid neo-Nazi survivalists he meets on the Internet and enlisting the support of his legendary Special Forces instructor, the fearsome Sergeant Hanson. Jamie goes along for the ride. And the author provides quite a ride, in this deceptively plain-spoken tale that turns out to be filled with clever, surrealistic, and darkly humorous plot twists.

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This novel seems to be based on an interesting idea and the characters we've come across so far are good, though I think it's kind of strange that the best character so far seems doomed to be peripheral--the father talking about Vietnam and how the movies misrepresent war. What's really missing so far is that everything reads flat. The prose is quite bland and, so far, there isn't a lot of excitement being generated around a topic that would seem to scream for more emotion.

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8:59 AM PST, February 18, 2008
One of my friends in high school became part of the inspiration for the character of Will in my novel. After being inspired by Revenge of the Nerds, he formed a Geek Pride group, then watched too many Rambo movies and joined the army. I just found out, in a random search on the web, that he was killed by a roadside bomb in Iraq on Memorial Day. He had been training troops and didn't think he could do an adequate job without experiencing combat first hand.
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6:55 AM PST, February 18, 2008
I've read a lot of suspense thrillers where they make a big deal about the author's bio -- they've run guns in some third-world hell hole, smuggled, worked for the CIA -- but when it comes to their books they are literary girlie men and froo-froo women with limp, timid prose and characters so weak they couldn't go mono-a-mono with a third tier character in a Jennifer Weiner novel. I've had my fair share of adventures. My grandfather was in the CIA and spent some time in a Guatemalan prison, my dad planned to take over an island in high school, I've worked as a journalist and corporate spy who has travelled the world. Yet, I hope what ultimate sells me is my stories, odd-ball characters, and clever turns of plot.

This first book turned out to be a little ahead of its time in the sense that it foresaw the American haughtiness that got us into Iraq. My second book, I believe, has done just as well in foreseeing the new world of private militaries. Mercenarys Cookbook is about a private chef who used to deliver aid to a country torn apart by civil war. When she hooks up with the head of a private security company hired by a Biblical Archeologist to obtain a descendant of the Tree of Knowledge, she signs on to deliver supplies for the operation and gets a chance to return to the country settle some old scores.

As with Taking Over, this book has parallel storylines set in the past and present that work off each other (much like Lost), and I thought it might be a chance to exploit some of the advantages of something like the Kindle that, so far, have gone overlooked. I find that some of my favorite aspects of DVDs are the DVD extras, in particular a movie like Momento, where the movie went backwards chronologically, but you could choose to watch the story with a forward trajectory on DVD.

In the electronic format, it would be possible to read each person's story individually, rather than in flashback, as short stories and novellas or chronologically, and I have written it with an eye towards making it feel as a "whole" story from whatever angle you approach it. You could even have "deleted scenes" you loved but just didn't make the cut, or give people the chance to click on commentary about certain passages.

Having just completed that novel, I have 200 pages of a Michael Chricton style SF novel about a meme simulation that allows nefarious forces to construct perfect "memes" -- ideas that spread like viruses. Such technology takes opinion-polling to the next level, where an idea is guaranteed to takeover. You decide the fads, the Presidents, mold public opinion to your interests.

Future projects involve the odd new world of modern piracy, taking place off the coast of Africa and the Malacca Straits. A few high-profile incidents have made the news, but the Law of the Sea is actually a fascinating experiment in Libertarianism -- governments have no jurisdiction, making it a free-market no-man's land where anything can be bought and sold without breaking any laws. Few people realize the sea is the last Wild West.
 
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6:25 AM PST, February 18, 2008
A few other odds and ends: I was mentioned in the "On Digital" podcast, Writers of the Future Blog and the SFF Newsletter.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Character Is Key, February 17, 2008
By B. Smith "steinhenge" (Houston, TX United States) - See all my reviews
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One of the things that make this opening section of the novel a compelling read is the author's determination to not just get on with the plot. Setting a leisurely pace allows Krider to build engaging, realistic characters and situations that simply force you to keep reading. Instead of starting this race with a mad dash, he saunters out of the gate with the confident air of someone who knows that there's plenty of time yet to play his hand.

Good stuff.