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Children of Light, an Amazon Short
by Caron Guillo (Author)
4.5 out of 5 stars  (18 customer reviews)

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Length:  19 words, 8 pages
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Editorial Reviews
manuscript review by Publishers Weekly, an independent organization
Although this novel uses the Children's Crusade of 1212 as its background, it is not a historical chronicle, but a very personal story, with few of the actual political players of the period appearing in a major role. Instead, the story traces the lives of several of the young followers of Nicolas of Cologne as they travel to Jerusalem, and over the years after the Crusade disperses. Each of the characters plays a stereotypical role in the story-the challenging girl, the clever and scholarly boy, the adventurous soldier - yet each of the portraits comes across as bold, rich, and easy to relate to rather than overworked. The author does a good job weaving the divergent stories together, both in terms of the pacing and in the way they come together at the end of the tale; although the events that bring them back together are fortuitous, the story manages not to come off as contrived. Overall, an enjoyable story with believable characters and an exciting plot.

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A very powerful story and I must admit that I was really drawn into it after the fist couple of pages. You really felt for the central character Elisabeth during her troubling times and it made me feel a little more human when reading it. The author's writing style is very good and I found that the writing flowed rather well and was not a chore at all to read. One thought I had when I read this particular body of text was that how much we as a people have changed and at the same time not changed at all. Something to really sit down and think about. I would purchase this book.

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8:00 PM PST, February 19, 2008
One thought I had when I read this particular body of text was . . . how much we as a people have changed and at the same time not changed at all.--Amazon Top Reviewer, writing about Children of Light

Yes! That's exactly what I hoped readers would discover when I wrote Children of Light.

It was with a great deal of intentionality that I emphasized the commonalities we share with the characters in this particular novel. Though this tale of three commoners begins in thirteenth century Germany at the dawn of an ill-conceived peasant crusade and ends a decade later on a sprawling estate in Egypt, I really wanted to make their story, OUR story.

And to be honest, the more I got to know Elisabeth, Hugo, and Simon (yes, novelists are weird that way), the more I realized they weren't driven to participate in the movement because of their strong convictions, but as a salve for their own brokenness. I suppose that's why I do a lot of the things I do. And while I'm not proud of that fact, I'm thrilled that--like the three crusaders--there's still hope for me, even in the midst of my darkest moments.
 
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8:46 AM PST, February 16, 2008
Several years ago I read an intriguing novel about the crusades which sent me to the encyclopedia in search of more information on the topic. At the end of the World Book article, I came across a few lines about a children's crusade that ended in tragedy, most of the participants either dying prematurely in the Alps or being betrayed and sold into slavery in Africa.
 

I actually gasped and re-read the paragraph three or four times. What in the world would possess children to set off on such a misadventure or their parents to allow it?

Sometime later when I had the tools and time to research the subject properly, I discovered that at the forefront of the so-called children's crusade was a charismatic and egotistical young commoner named Nicholas, that most of the "crusaders" were young adults, and that parents were generally terrified of the movement, seeking to protect their children from a disastrous end.

 
I couldn't let the story go. Why would unarmed, untrained, unfinanced peasants think they could accomplish what professional armies had not? How desperate or deluded must an individual be to join such an ill-fated mission? And what about all those young people sold into slavery? How did they live with the consequences of their mistakes?

 
I began to envision a young woman who would do anything to win freedom from her past. A young man who dreams of rising above his lowly status to change the world. A would-be warrior looking for a fight, and perhaps a bit of fortune.

 
And so began my exploration into the lives of three young commoners who thought they had nothing left to lose.
 
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