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The Blue Hour, an Amazon Short
by Jason Snow (Author)
4.4 out of 5 stars  (19 customer reviews)

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Length:  16 words, 8 pages
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Editorial Reviews
manuscript review by Publishers Weekly, an independent organization
Shortly before a Chicago Christmas in 1999, a graduate student named Jamie witnesses a fatal car accident involving a U-Haul. He goes home and discovers that not only has his fiancee Robin left him and taken most of the furniture, but that she and her new lover were the victims in that accident. Although this darkly comic novel doesn't maintain quite that level of oddness throughout, it does have its share of moments. Seven months later, Jamie is depressed, avoiding his friends, and unable to successfully commit suicide (trying to hang himself, his ceiling fan comes crashing down). Cajoled by his boss/father figure Mr. Riley and his high school friend Todd , he agrees to go to his tenth high school reunion, where he encounters Emma, whom Jamie still blames for the death of his best friend, Nate. Although the second half of the novel suffers from being overly sentimental, Jamie's quirkiness (he has a superstition about reading any copy of a book twice, and thus has owned 41 copies of Camus's "The Stranger"), as well as the author's sharp ear for dialogue, keeps things lively.

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This story has an interesting start. Jamie is distraught when he witnesses a fatal truck accident that he thinks he might have contributed to. When he returns home, he finds that his home has been robbed, but then discovers that his fiance has left him, taking much of their stuff with her, and that she was one of the fatalities from the truck. It would be interesting to see how a man would deal with this much heartache all at once, and I'd imagine the rest of the novel will deal with him unraveling what happened in his relationship and figuring out what direction his life should take from here. This has the potential to be a compelling character study. Jamie struck me as a bit dim, though. When he returns home and sees he has been robbed, he doesn't really do anything except leave a message for his fiance and then talk to his boss. Wasn't he worried someone might still be in his apartment? Why wouldn't he call the police? I also didn't think it was realistic that Jamie wouldn't realize that his fiance was ready to leave him. There must have been something seriously wrong in his relationship. How could he not know that? The story of the aftermath of these tragic events might be an interesting one, provided that Jamie turns into a more realistic character.

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19 Reviews
5 star: 57%  (11)
4 star: 26%  (5)
3 star: 15%  (3)
2 star:    (0)
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6 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars Interesting protagonist but he keeps pushing me away. , January 17, 2008
(SPOILER ALERT)
There were two chapters introduced in this excerpt. Since the second chapter was truncated, I found it confusing so I won't comment on it. The premise of the first chapter of "The Blue Hour" was interesting, though. The protagonist, Jamie, witnesses a car accident. Jamie then returns to his apartment to find that his fiance has not only left him but was fatally injured in the same accident that had startled him moments ago.

It is difficult to articulate a critique for this one because the author does so many things right. The description of the car accident is gripping and it pulls the reader in immediately; a very good way to start a book. I enjoyed some of Jamie's inner thoughts and the introduction of the expressive Mr. Riley, Jamie's friend and landlord.

It seemed to me, however, that the author is holding the reader at arms-length. I get to observe Jamie's life but he won't let me get too close, too invested. Just when I catch a glimpse of his vulnerability, he distracts me with mundane details. For instance, following the shock of the car accident, someone asks Jamie if he is okay - and I'm wondering how he's doing, too. I want him to let me in and show me what's happening to him. Instead of showing me how he is, however, he tells me that the questioner is a barista named Kate who is wearing short sleeves and is probably cold. Grrrr...I want to slap him. I KNOW he's feeling something. I know it's gritty and ugly and harsh but he just won't share it with me.

I really liked Jamie but was perpetually irritated that the camera of my mind was pushed away from the close-ups. So, here's my plea to author: stop protecting Jamie. Let me see him in all of his flawed, wonderful humanity. He's going through something profound and all he can talk about are Aesthetics? Let me be struck through with pain when I find that Robin is gone. Let me cry with Jamie. Let me feel him hurt.

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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Anxiously waiting the rest of the story..., January 21, 2008
By Carole Wilson (Loon Lake Hale Michigan) - See all my reviews
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I thoroughly enjoyed the authors ability to take me to a particular place and time..so well described, like I was there going through it with him,,characters in the story, so far, are introduced well,,, in such a short time! I already feel I know them and anticipate getting to know them much better,, much like Jamie, and the story he has just begun to tell me,,,
I found the tale he is spinning very easy to read and follow, even though the author gives tons of information in a short time....I always feel if a book can capture me in the first paragraphs, wanting me to read on, its a hit! Just makes me want to read the book,,it's that simple
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars Good start, February 25, 2008
By C. McCallum "Book lover" (Los Angeles, CA, USA) - See all my reviews
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Jason Snow has made a good start on this novel. His protagonist, Jamie McKenzie, is sympathetic and interesting, if a little scattered. The car accident is perfectly described and provides a compelling beginning, finally drawing the reader in completely when the circle with the robbery/missing girlfriend is closed. There are delightful turns of phrase scattered throughout the prose: "a thick bang like a bag of aluminum cans getting crushed all at once", "The TV sat lonely on our homemade entertainment system", "his beard clung to him like Tennessee creeper vine".

If I have complaints, they are few: the names, Jamie and Robin, are androgynous enough that it took me a while to figure out what gender everybody was; it didn't make sense to me that Jamie wouldn't simply call the police as soon as he realized he'd been robbed; the cut-away from his learning of Robin's betrayal and death was so abrupt that I thought the second chapter was introducing an entirely new character. Nit: there are many unhyphenated phrases here which should be hyphenated.

All in all, my complaints aside, this is interesting and an entertaining read.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Great use of the 1st person PoV
The author's choice of the first person point of view was perfect. So much of this excerpt deals with how Jamie is dealing (or not) with internal turmoil and conflict that any... Read more
Published 4 months ago by A. Cryblskey

5.0 out of 5 stars Off to a great start...
Intense begining to what I'm sure will be a great story. Jamie seems like a real relatable guy and I can't wait to find out where he ends up.
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4.0 out of 5 stars What happened...
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5.0 out of 5 stars waiting ...
When the first chapter ended, I could have had that level of satisfaction one has when a movie ends mid-story and you're left wondering what happens next in the character's lives... Read more
Published 5 months ago by Joyce Kaiser

4.0 out of 5 stars Great read.
Weird. I used to know a guy named Jamie McKenzie.

The writer has a good understanding of casual dialouge, which helps build up to the not so casual shock moments... Read more
Published 5 months ago by Clayton Tuttle

3.0 out of 5 stars desolation for jaime, what really awaits him
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3.0 out of 5 stars The Blue Hour Sings A Sad Song.
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