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18 of 22 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
A premise that wasn't explored thoroughly enough, January 4, 2003
Neville Wyatt, the Earl of Kilbourne, is standing at the altar, waiting for his bride, when a woman dressed like a beggar barges into the church. Much to the shock of the beau monde gathered for the occasion, Neville immediately recognises the intruder as Lily Doyle, the woman he secretly married on a battlefield in Portugal one year earlier, their union the result of an honour-bound promise made to Lily's father as he died.Neville thought Lily was dead; the day after their wedding and one night of passion mingling with their mourning for Lily's father, they'd been caught in an ambush and both of them were shot. In fact, Lily was made a prisoner and despite the protection of her marriage to an officer, she was forced to become her jailor's sexual slave before she was freed and could travel back to England to find Neville -- a traumatising experience that is somewhat underused. But back to the general premise... Neville had been taken away from the ambush scene unconscious. He had woken later, had been told that Lily was dead, and had gone back to England and Newbury Abbey, where he'd proceeded get on with his life as the Earl of Kilbourne. This included a marriage to his cousin and childhood friend, Lauren, betrothed to him by birth. One reviewer wonders why Neville didn't bother to look for Lily, and although I wouldn't put it in quite as strong terms, it is an interesting question. Neville was an army officer at the time, and one who'd just escaped from what could have been a lethal bullet wound. If he'd loved Lily that dearly, why hadn't he looked for her instead of running back home and gone back to his life? Lily forgives him and even claims there was no guilt to begin with, but I wasn't convinced myself. How could Neville go on with the plan of marrying another woman barely one year after vowing his love to Lily Doyle? We could argue that Neville agreed to marry Lauren because she was the woman that his father wanted him to marry. Neville, after all, had left Newbury as part of the rebellion of his young age, and though not without his father's consent, at least not with his blessing. Marrying Lauren was probably a way to redeem himself and obtain forgiveness from his dead father, but this aspect was unfortunately not developed in One Night For Love. But Neville is determined to honour his promise to Lily's father and be a husband to her. His wedding to Lauren is therefore cancelled in the very beginning of the book, and Lily awkwardly enters the circle of the Newbury family. As a sergeant's daughter, she lacks the education that would at least make her pass for a Lady. She astonishes the whole of Newbury Abbey by spending time with the tenants in the village or down in the kitchen with the servants. In truth, Lily feels extremely inadequate among Neville's peers. She doesn't read, doesn't write, doesn't play the pianoforte, and she knows nothing about the propriety and attitude expected from a Countess. The book tends to focus on Lily's character, and I think it suffers from this one-sided focus. It's sometimes difficult to understand Neville's motivations indeed. He appears like a cold character in the beginning of the book, as if he didn't care much about Lily's feelings of inadequacy. He's aware of them, but doesn't do enough to reassure her. She married Major Newbury, but the man she finds at Newbury Abbey is the Earl of Kilbourne. In the first few scenes of the book, Lily even doubts Neville's love for her and wonders if he didn't give up on the idea of marrying Lauren (a woman who is completely suited for him) simply out of a sense of duty. And one can wonder if it is the case at first. Even when he discovers that his wedding to Lily isn't officially valid, his first argument to marry her rightfully is that he wants to honour the promise made to Lily's father. But Lily refuses his offer and decides to accompany Neville's aunt Elisabeth to London and become her companion. Which brings me to the second problem I had with One Night For Love. It tends to take sharp turns before an issue is thoroughly explored, and as a reader I sometimes felt dragged along instead of willingly accompanying the characters on their paths, as if those sharp turns were only here to keep the characters apart artificially. And this was a frustrating element of a book that would have been excellent otherwise. The heroine, Lily, is a character you can easily like. Her inadequacy during her stay at Newbury brought me to tears on a couple of occasions. I had more trouble with Neville, but I suspect that if his character had been more thoroughly dealt with, he could have convinced me of the sincerity of his feelings. However, Mary Balogh's impeccable style is right there. Her evocative descriptions of the valley and the beach at Newbury, as well as the level of poignancy in her emotional scenes, kept me reading all along. And it *is* a good romance... Just not unforgettable.
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