Personal Demon (Women of the Otherworld, Book 8) (Mass Market Paperback)

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From Publishers Weekly

Chaos rules in Armstrong's complex eighth Women of the Otherworld installment (after 2007's No Humans Involved). The formidable Benicio Cortez once helped tabloid-reporting, gun-toting, chaos demon spy girl Hope Adams out of a jam, so she agrees to go undercover and join a supernatural youth gang that's been causing problems for Cortez's multinational corporation. Assuming the persona of bratty rich co-ed Faith Edmonds, Hope works her way into the gang, participates in heists and soon finds herself dangerously attracted to one of the other members, cute Jasper Jaz Haig. All too soon, Jaz's diabolical plans lead to a shocking tragedy. Armstrong excels in depicting Hope's transformations, but new readers might want to read earlier books to get context for all the mayhem. (Mar.)
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Half chaos-craving demon, half-human tabloid reporter Hope Adams, who clandestinely works for a council of paranormal beings, goes undercover for the Cortez Cabal by infiltrating a gang of paranormals. She is soon joined in Miami by ex-lover Karl Marsten, a master thief and lone werewolf; Lucas Cortez, sorcerer heir to the Cortez Cabal; and Paige Winterbourne, the witches’ delegate to the council. Hope likes the young gang members, who run a nightclub and pull capers on the side. When two of the them are kidnapped, suspicions flare. A series of murders and an invasion into cabal CEO Benicio Cortez’s home leave Hope wondering which side is the right side to be on. As she fights her craving for the orgasmic thrill of chaos, the pace of events accelerates, turning this into a page-turning thriller. Fans of the paranormal will delight in the eighth Women of the Underworld yarn, with its ass-kicking, Bollywood-beautiful, former-socialite heroine and full complement of sorcerers, witches, werewolves, and other paranormal beings. --Diana Tixier Herald --This text refers to the Hardcover edition.

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Product Details

• Mass Market Paperback: 544 pages
• Publisher: Bantam; Mass Market Edition edition (September 30, 2008)
• Language: English
• ISBN-10: 0553588206
• ISBN-13: 978-0553588200
• Product Dimensions: 6.8 x 4.2 x 1.3 inches
• Shipping Weight: 9.6 ounces (View shipping rates and policies)
• Average Customer Review: 4.0 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (55 customer reviews)
• Amazon.com Sales Rank: #38,650 in Books (See Bestsellers in Books)

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21 of 22 people found the following review helpful:

5.0 out of 5 stars Great novel in the 'Women Of The Otherworld' series, March 25, 2008

By	Helen Hancox "Auntie Helen" (Essex, England) - See all my reviews (TOP 500 REVIEWER)    (REAL NAME)

This review is from: Personal Demon (Women of the Otherworld, Book 8) (Hardcover)

Hope Adams may seem like an ordinary tabloid reporter but she's something rather more than that, being a half-demon whose demon nature feeds on and revels in chaos. When she has to pay off a debt by carrying out a difficult and dangerous undercover mission amongst a gang of young supernaturals she jumps at the chance to prove herself, especially to Karl, her erstwhile lover. However Hope turns out to be rather good at her undercover job and infiltrates the gang deeply, soon realising that all is not well in the supernatural world. When becoming involved in murders and having to try to overcome her own attraction to the chaos of some of the gang's events she finds she has to rely on Karl as well as Lucas and his wife, people who might just see her as a young and silly girl. When the four of them start to investigate a string of murders Hope learns that things aren't always as they seem, despite her talent for seeing visions of events.

The book is told mostly from the perspective of Hope but there are some chapters from the viewpoint of Lucas Cortez. I wasn't entirely sure of the reason for this as I did feel it slightly interrupted the flow of the narrative and that this alternative point of view didn't add a great deal to the story; however it was interesting to read of Lucas's difficulties reconciling his situation as heir to his Father's Cabal (a supernatural business/cult) and his personal opposition to the Cabal system that operates almost like slavery for some.

Hope has appeared in previous books in this series which did mean that sometimes the reader felt like they had missed rather a lot of the plot of this book before it had started. This is particularly with regard to her relationship with Karl although their awkward discussions and embarrassment with each other following their former failed relationship were well written. The strong points of Kelley Armstrong's books are her characters, the supernatural world which they hide amongst the humans and her excellent pacing and timing. This book was always enjoyable to read, the various characters all felt very distinct and interesting and the world of the Cabals was a great setting to a story about a young woman growing up and growing into herself as well as finding someone who can understand and support her. Well worth a read, even for those who haven't read others in this series.

Originally published for Curled Up With A Good Book © Helen Hancox 2008

20 of 22 people found the following review helpful:

4.0 out of 5 stars Hope goes undercover (4.5 stars) , March 27, 2008

By	R. Kyle (USA) - See all my reviews (TOP 500 REVIEWER)    (REAL NAME)

This review is from: Personal Demon (Women of the Otherworld, Book 8) (Hardcover)

Hope Adams, heiress and half demon daughter of Lucifer, finally gets a chance to pay her debt to the Cortez Cabal and show her ex, the werewolf Karl, that she can handle a tough case on her own.

It's a simple job, according to cabal leader, Benecio Cortez. All he wants is for her to infiltrate a Miami-based youth gang to determine exactly what kind of trouble these kids are going to pose for the cabal.

Hope gets clearance from Luke Cortez, Benecio's declared heir, who works with the Council. Lucas, who is Benecio's youngest and illegitimate son, is an opponent of the cabals--seeing them as exploiters of the supernatural employees, so he's advising Hope to use caution because Benecio may well not be telling her everything he knows.

Both Hope and Lucas end up in danger as they try to sort out precisely what is happening. There's a serious threat to the Cortez Cabal as well as Hope herself. Both Hope and Lucas have to face their own personal demons to see this situation through.

"Personal Demon" definitely advances the overall story arc for this fascinating series. As always, Kelley Armstrong is excellent at character development and she's worked hard to keep the storylines consistent throughout.

Both Hope and Lucas have interesting stories to tell, but the point of view switches are not as smooth as I've read in previous novels. Plus, some of the 'mindwork' that Hope has to do in order to feed her demon can be confusing and awkward to read.

"Personal Demon" did add an interesting element to the mix of talents and a new adversary to watch out for. The book's definitely worth a read.

Rebecca Kyle, March 27, 2008

15 of 17 people found the following review helpful:

4.0 out of 5 stars (4.5 stars) Big changes since the last book, new narrator(s), new views on old enemies, but still the same old series we love , May 30, 2008

By	Lilly Flora "by Lilo Drandoff" (Portland, OR) - See all my reviews (TOP 500 REVIEWER)

This review is from: Personal Demon (Women of the Otherworld, Book 8) (Hardcover)

Well, it's that time of year again. Somewhere between late spring and early summer when the latest installment of Kelley Armstrong's bestselling "Women of the Otherworld" series comes out. This year "Personal Demon" is added to the 8 novel series, featuring Hope Adams, a half demon who's father is Lucifer (not Satan-different person altogether) and has a thing for chaos. A thing that sometimes takes over her better side and just wants to enjoy watching people be tortured or dieing. Like Jamie Vegas in "No Humans Involved" while Hope has a power, it can do nothing to defend her-expect warn her that danger (chaos is coming.) Luckily the chaos alarm keeps there from being a lot of wining about being powerless like Jamie indulged in.

Needless to say Hope isn't completely comfortable with this power. But she's had some help to deal with it, the interracial supernatural council and Karl, the latest edition to the Werewolf pack (who can also be found in books "Bitten" "Broken" and "No Humans Involved") and until recently, a romantic interest of Hope's. But after one night of passion Karl ran out, leaving the only tie between the two a mutual debt to the Cortez Cabal for getting them out of a spot of trouble.

Hope's just trying to work on a completely false werewolf story for the tabloid she writes for when Benicio Cortez decides the time has come to call in the debt. He wants Hope to infiltrate a supernatural gang operating in Miami and access their organization and threat to the Cabal. It's a strange request because, well, almost nothing has the power to threaten a cabal (think mob with magic), especially not a half dozen young supernaturals pulling off relatively small heists. But Hope, seeing the potential for guilt free Chaos takes the gig.

It all seems like harmless, well organized chaos inducing fun to Hope until (just after Karl arrives to help out) two of the gang members-including a potential love interest of Hope's- disappear, apparently kidnapped by the Cortex Cabal. This development brings in Lucas Cortez (the youngest son of Benicio and unwilling heir to the family business), along with his wife Paige to town for support. Soon everyone is doubting if the gang had inside Cabal connections, if one of Benicio's older passed over and power hunger sons is helping them....and if so, what's the big plan?

Of course this is all combined with lots of sex, supernatural fights, sleuthing, musings on being a supernatural but never being able to tell you're parents...the usual for an Armstrong book.

But there are a couple of big changes since "No Humans Involved." For one thing, half of this book is narrated by Lucas. Yup, that's right-a guy. Considering the events in this book it's not really a bad decision but it is breaking an established pattern and certainly had me confused at first. In the end though, while Lucas never really did come off in his narrative as I had pictured him, it was a decent portrayal.

Now that I think of it, it's not like I would be adverse to a "Men of the Otherworld" series.

Also I had a pretty hard time reconciling the Karl in this book (a werewolf jewel thief whose gruff but sensitive, loving, protective, worried about the girl he loves) with the one who committed such heinous acts in "Bitten." I mean people (and not so completely people) change but this is kind of a drastic 360. Although I guess being in love...Whatever. I still have a hard time seeing him as any kind of hero (interested in the gig or not.)

And sadly, this series has reached the point where not only can novels in this series not stand alone, but if you're not following along with the (free!) short stories on the author's website, there are going to be parts you won't understand. Nothing major, but with a cast of characters this large and each book about a year apart in time, things happen and not all of that can be stuffed into the books. Of course publishing a short story anthology could fix this....

As always. I advise new comers to start at the beginning with "Bitten" no matter how attractive a later book sounds because there will be research to do to understand characters, back stories, supernatural stuff...

In the end I enjoyed this book a lot more than I thought I would. While "Personal Demons" does get off to a kind of lame start, once things heat up, well, things heat up. I can't say this will make my top five for the series but it had much more depth than the slightly shallow "No Humans Involved" and it's certainly not going to deter me from purchasing the next book, "Living with the Dead". However if like me, you prefer the early books to the later one's, you might want to wait until this comes out in a cheaper edition.


Four point five stars. (The extra added for the oh so cute little tidbit about Clay and Elena's twins!)