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24 of 25 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Enjoyable, but..., August 30, 2004
Let me start out with the positive: the story is enjoyable, and had some severe problems been corrected like they should have been during the editing/revising process, Harem would have been a wonderful book.
Now, for the problems: bad pacing, no character development, fantastical characters with no reason to be that way, and the author's demand that you completely suspend belief without telling you why. Let me go into the latter first.
Me--and most fiction readers in general--are willing to let go of reality and believe whatever the writer wants them to believe, as long as it makes sense. As long as they are told why. Mossanen never gives a reason for things; they just are. No reason or rhyme, no effort to show you something instead of just telling you. Continously throughout Harem, she flat out informs the reader of what's what, treating the reader as rather slow. Harem would have been miles ahead of where it is now quality-wise had Mossanen taken steps to correct this one flaw. The reader will accept what the writer puts out there, but she needs to know why she's accepting it. Rebekah is allowed in as the bundle woman for the Harem and is suddenly the best of the best...why? Other than being arrogant, pushy, slightly grating, and a magnificent tease, WHY? Gold Dust is requested to dance for the Shah...WHY? One page she's an unknown newbie in the harem, and on the next page, she's suddenly the favorite. WHY?
Which brings me to my next point: pacing. I don't mind spending chapters on one day and only a paragraph or two spanning ten years--if that one day is important and the ten years are not. Mossanen does not quite seem to understand this. It's not so much a problem of what she does cover. The scenes, chapters, etc in Harem are relevant...unfortunately, she leaves out years-worth of material that could make the characters more believable. (Being more thorough would have corrected a lot of the other problems I've mentioned, as well.)
I'll combine the last two: fantastical characters and little to no development. Rebekah just is the way she is. Gold Dust just is the way she is. Raven just is the way she is. They don't change, and the reader is given very little reason as to what made them the way they are. Every now and then there is a glimpse: Rebekah's abusive marriage to Jacob and feelings of abandonment by her mother, for instance. However, Mossanen abandons these too quickly when a little bit more time spent on them would make a huge difference to the likeability and understanding of a character. And I'm sorry, Ms. Mossanen, but a five year old taming a wild horse? Were this a different genre of fiction, or even were the girl's abilities explained better and buoyed by evidence in the story, I would be more open-minded regarding it. Unfortunately, the lack of character development and/or the effort to make the characters believable is enough to cripple the story.
With all that said, the story's NOT bad. It just feels as if it skipped half of the editing/revision process. A good editor could have taken care of these, and had it been so, I could easily see myself falling in love with this story. Harem is a fun read and it's very interesting. The ideas and the plot intricacies are well-thought out and obviously the products of long, hard hours at the desk, pen in hand. Mossanen definitely did her research. I just wish she would have done her editing, too.
3 stars given for the story itself. 2 stars withheld for feeling like an unfinished, disappointing product.
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23 of 26 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
A wonderful debut, May 19, 2003
Harem by Dora Levy MossanenLast year I read Dora Levy Mossanen's debut novel HAREM, about a fictional family of women that rise above their station in life and live among the world of the Shah of Persia and his consorts. The novel takes place in 14th century Persia, during the days of the Ottoman Empire, and initially centers on the daughter of a Jewish woman living in the Jewish quarters, a life full of poverty and suffering. Rebekah is the daughter of this woman, and her mother sells her as a bride to a man called Jacob the Fatherless, thinking this will be a way to save her daughter from the same fate as hers. Unfortunately, Jacob treats Rebekah as his property and creates a living hell for the young girl, who is barely 10 years old upon their marriage. She never sees her mother again, and is trapped with Jacob to live out the rest of her life. Before Rebekah goes to live with Jacob however, she hears a voice of a stranger, never sees his face, and thinks this is the man that her mother has promised her to marry. Her dreams are shattered once she marries Jacob, but she will never forget that voice. She carries the memory through her days of suffering under the house of Jacob, who abuses her and nearly kills her. Upon the birth of their daughter Gold Dust, Jacob brands Rebeka with a hot poker, angry that this child is not a son. He starts to believe that this child is not his child at all, accusing Rebekah of adultery, and treats the child the way he treats Rebekah. Rebekah, like her mother before her, wants only the best for her child, and through bravery and cunning, she finds a way to give Gold Dust that life. Eventually, the young girl makes her way into the Shah's harem, and their lives are changed forever. Ms. Mossanen paints a vivid picture of a fantastical life of 14th century Persia. Part fantasy, part history, HAREM is a book that if nothing else, will stir up the reader's interest in a life that is totally different from that of the Western World. She places a few historical events into the storyline, along with a few historical figures such as Timurlane, but there is a lot of fantasy mixed in as well. A very enjoyable piece of historical fiction, this reviewer gives HAREM an enthusiastic thumbs up.
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
moderately successful, July 19, 2004
Harem was a brief and not very involving read. The writing lacked lyricism, although it was clear the author tried very hard to peak the reader's imagination. The novel is sprinkled with magical realism without any follow through. Fantastical characters and scenes are presented more for the sake of oddity than for any emphasis on a narrative thread. The implicit promise of eroticism given by the title and subject matter also fails to meet expectations. There is nothing particularly lurid about the more perverse sex scenes, and nothing remotely sexy in those scenes intended to be viewed as romantic or intimate. Ms. Mossanen uses graphic terms to indicate the former, and more airy and vague words for the latter. Obvious reasearch went into this book, the infighting and favoritism inherent in the harem has a bitingly real feel. Unfortunately, nothing else does. And finally, how could the protaganists fail to realize where the fortune lay for so long. That was clear to the reader from the very pivotal moment where it is created in that state.
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