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9 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
AN UNDERDONE CULINARY MYSTERY, March 19, 2005
Presented as a culinary mystery "A Catered Wedding, " never quite gels. At least for this reader. Too many grammatical errors cry for an able editor. "She weren't going into a tunnel."? When errors are this obvious it's more than distracting.
Characters, especially sisters Libby and Bernie Simmons are never quite fleshed out. One's usual response is to click her tongue on the roof of her mouth, while the other slides her ring up and down on her finger. Unless these are explained as nervous tics, one wonders why these movements occur so frequently. Perhaps the characters that best come alive are two elderly sisters, Gertrude and Eunice, who often sport outrageous garb and dye their hair in Crayola colors.
Those qualifications aside, this is "A Mystery with Recipes" that never boils but simply simmers from the opening pages when about-to-be bride Leeza Sharp is done in by an arrow through the chest. Libby and Bernie have been hired to cater the wedding which, for obvious reasons will not take place.
Leeza's groom was to be Jura Raid, a wealthy caviar dealer, some years the bride's senior but able to give her everything she ever wanted. Jura shares vending roe with his two brothers, Ditas and Joe, both of whom are dark and suspicious. Now, as most agreed Leeza was unpleasant, nonetheless, she did not deserve such a sudden departure.
So, abetted by their father, Sean, a retired police officer who is now confined to a wheelchair, Bernie and Libby take it upon themselves to find the murderer. Along the way they involve Marvin, pudgy son of the local undertaker who has warm feelings for Libby, and Esmeralda, Jura's right hand woman who has more than warm feelings for him.
Rather than building suspense the narrative tends to bog in dialogue and preposterous undertakings on the part of Bernie and Libby. The conclusion is rather abrupt. As the sisters breathed sighs of relief so did this reader.
- Gail Cooke
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Likable Sisters, April 7, 2006
This is the second novel in the series and I won't go through the story since you probably know it by now from reading the other reviews. I like the sisters, their totally different personalities makes it refreshing. I did not guess the murderer, which is saying something, because I'm usually pretty good at that so it was a plus. The only problem I had was one that has been mentioned and that was the poor grammatical errors throughout the book. You never know if it is the writer or the publisher's fault. I would like to ask Ms. Crawford to please find another word in place of "snort" or "snorted." I found it annoying that so many people were "snorting" their way through conversations......"he snorted," "she snorted,"...etc., etc. I think there were at least two "snorts" per chapter, maybe more but I didn't count them. This was the same for the first book, "A Catered Murder." I had fun with the characters...this was a light read and good for a day when you need to fill in some time. I will continue to read the books to see what relationship evolves between Libby and Marvin and if Sean (their father)will actually NOT be embarrassed to be seen in public in his wheelchair. His view on that has bothered me, and gives the hint that maybe disabled person's should be heard....not seen.
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Incomplete and disappinting story., April 20, 2005
Iwould not waste money on buying this book. Borrow it from the library if you think you have to read it.
The editing is poor to the point of distraction. The characters never really firm up and at the end there are many loose ends that go unsolved. Even the last recipe seems to have a missing ingredient.
The story line probably was a good idea; I kept waiting for something to happen, but it just never did.
Ann Amantea
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