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21 of 22 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Controversial, steamy - mildly disturbing, January 25, 2006
I often note there are a few things that make me never want to have a daughter: 1) That T-Mobile commercial where the cheerleader squawks on the phone incessantly to her friend 2) the movie Thirteen and 3) this book.
100 Strokes of the Brush Before Bed - as the hype conveyed - would be nothing without the string of sexual encounters, all graphically relived, through the pages of "Melissa P."s diary. The blase nature of the parents, who take little to no interest in their daughter's life, are almost certainly the catalyst for "Melissa P"'s sexploits and flowery (yet often captivating) writing style. While it's truly a coming of age novel, the character's development is on warp-speed as she's left to her own devices to experiment, often in dangerous situations, with her sexuality. Throughout, the character never breaks form, and the reader begins to anticipate her path; fear for her and maybe even envy her exploits - even if just a little. Maybe it's because this girl is 15 and her descriptions are so vivid... or maybe it's because she's had more sex than most 30 year-olds I know - not sure. But, this was one of the more provocative books I've read in awhile.
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52 of 61 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Doesn't Live Up to the Hype, January 17, 2005
I always hesitate to criticize the prose to sharply when the book I'm reading is a translation. Still, I have to say that, though there are interesting moments in this "story," for the most part I was unimpressed. The writing to me was self-indulgent and childish, typical of a teenage girl's diary but not the ones that usually receive world-wide publication. Is this really the way a teenager thinks and speaks in the twenty-first century? If so, then they don't think and speak too differently from the writers of erotic novels in Victorian times.
From the reviews and interviews I've read, some of the popularity of this novel is explained by the fact that it is based on the author's own experiences. Considering that, it does offer the story a little more poignancy. But what is this book supposed to do for the reader, then? Are we supposed to be aroused by the eroticism or saddened by the poor protagonist's violations? In the end, various passages made me feel a little of both. But the key word there is "little." I was not extraordinarily moved in either direction and I didn't feel like I was left with any universal insights into the experiences of a modern teenager.
It actually bothers me that I was disappointed by this book. I was probably expecting a little too much from the hype in the articles I'd read. And I really dislike doing anything that might discourage a young person from picking up a pen and exploring their feelings in writing. It is true that journals and diaries can often provide inspiration for wonderful works of fiction and nonfiction. Rarely, however, is the journal itself a brilliant work. This one, I think, is not.
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12 of 14 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
What are you people talking about???, April 26, 2005
I am at the very end of this book and I cannot put it down. I read some of the other critics and I can't believe they are reading the same book. One critic says this girl is not like other young italian women I know -- just how many italian women do you know (or anybody) all act and think exactly a like. Another critic says the gang bang scene would never happen like that -- geeze there are 5 billion people in this world, each a little or a lot different from each other, I gurantee things are happening right now that you wouldn't think possible or plausible.
The sex in this story is erotic and fascinating, it is the psychology of the girl that I find most interesting. She is a young libertine, much like the de Sade was, who craves sexual experiences not only to find love, but more so, to find passion and new experiences from her other wise mundane life.
Between her proclivities she consistently talks about how boring, regular or lonely she feels.
The fact that a 17 year old wrote this and made it utterly persuasive is impressive. If you think you could do a better job, please do, but don't bash her for being young.
Finally, the dialogue matches how most people talk in real life. And her depiction of the modern male over the internet was right on. Read the book, and be open minded.
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