From Library Journal
Lauchman, who teaches business writing to corporations, adopts a low-key, practical, sometimes iconoclastic approach to the writing that people are required to do every day "where money changes hands." Writers, he says, should convey and not express. He talks in terms of "the order of words" rather than of dangling participles and misplaced modifiers. The many examples are often humorous and the comparisons excellent (e.g., extra words are compared to too much water in tea). Interestingly, he declares that bad writing is not taught in school but learned on the job and is often perpetuated by company style guidebooks and managerial reviews. Although the book is sometimes redundant and awkward in its attempt not to sound like a traditional grammar, business writers will enjoy it and benefit from it. Of interest to public, academic, and special libraries.
- Nancy Shires, East Carolina Univ., Greenville, N.C.Copyright 1993 Reed Business Information, Inc.
A commonly voiced complaint today is that the average person cannot express him- or herself in writing. Lauchman, head of a firm specializing in training professionals to write better, disagrees. The problem, he says, is that writing is often intended to impress others or conceal meaning. He describes the result as counterproductive, irresponsible, and needlessly complex. What Lauchman offers are three dozen guidelines designed to eliminate obfuscating jargon and convoluted constructions. He also dismisses as grammatical "dogma" rigid injunctions against split infinitives and one-sentence paragraphs and offers examples of when such violations may be appropriate.
Plain Style is a fine addition to any memo writer's reference shelf.
David Rouse