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45 of 53 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Better writing and presentation would help, June 23, 2000
By A Customer
I typically like to be presented with ideas and concepts with enough information presented in an such a way that I will reach the same conclusion as the author or presenter has done him or herself.When information is being presented to promote one's viewpoint on any topic, be it life, love, death, etc. I want to be taken into this world in a descriptive and visualized way in order to sense on my own what THIS experience really is. I believe this would be generally called objectivity. Mr. Orr would do much better working with this. Breaking The Death Habit unfortunately has a habit of presenting information in both structure and prose that reads more like the advertising of an expensive vitamin plan, which includes useful facts, first account stories, new terms ("death urge" is my favorite marketing ploy used in the book), and enough negative reinforcement to drop everything and head to the mountains in order to stop this terrible thing called death that we have all subscribed to. And by the way, it's a really really bad thing if you don't do something right now about it! What this book really needs is a rewrite. There are some very interesting accounts of immortality here, along with education from terms, thoughts, physical exercizes, that can be quite useful. What this book contains in its presentation is negativity and reinforcement, which is ironic to this reader, because Mr. Orr has a section of the book specifically aimed at organized religion and how it's negativity and reinforcement creates fear and misinformation to the masses. I think Mr. Orr can learn much from his own writing. Also, there are better ways of presenting a singular, personal experience without the reader feeling like he or she is less relevant than the writer. It takes away from the overall character of what the book's message is all about.
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