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1.0 out of 5 stars
Sensationalism - Not the treatment this subject deserves, June 30, 2010
This review is from: Storytelling: Bewitching the Modern Mind (Hardcover)
Salmon is concerned about the growth of applied storytelling: storytelling used to persuade, sell, or educate. In particular, he rails against the use of stories and storytelling in business and politics, in seven chapters with titles like these:
- The New "Fiction Economy" (about manipulating workers emotionally so they can, in turn, fool customers)
- Turning Politics Into a Story (about the role of narrative in recent presidential politics in the U.S.)
- Telling War Stories (about video-game-like, immersive military training) and
- The Propaganda Empire (Karl Rove, Fox News, the internet and more.)
Salmon sees all these trends as combining to form a frightening replacement of a reality-based world with a series of "shared fictions" (p.67). His claim is that storytelling puts emotions over rational thought, elevates entertaining fiction over hard reality, and replaces political skill with "fictional competence."
But I believe that, like all tools, storytelling can be used for good or bad, to illuminate the nature of reality or to conceal it. Salmon, to be sure, puts his finger on some disturbing uses of storytelling. But he focuses blame on the tool, not on those using it or even on those of us who allow ourselves to be manipulated.
I would have loved a good book about the dangers of mis-applied storytelling. But this isn't it.
Salmon writes like a muck-raking journalist. He is good at assembling many examples of storytelling-as-deception and assembling them into an alarming montage. But he has clearly spent more time compiling examples than constructing a penetrating analysis of them - or suggesting a reasonable corrective for society.
To make things worse, his writing is frequently lacking in the logic that he glorifies. He often uses examples that don't support his conclusions. He uses emotional language in an apparent attempt to prejudice the reader against his targets. (For example, people in favor of storytelling are most often referred to as "gurus" in his book, whereas those critical of it are "researchers.")
He doesn't appear to have noticed that the emphasis during the Industrial Age on "discipline" and "rational argument" has failed to make us happy or peaceful. Most importantly, he doesn't seem to notice that storytelling's increased presence is in part a reaction to the suppression of important aspects of the human experience.
Altogether, his implied story has more in common with tabloid journalism than with reasoned analysis: "We are being manipulated by unseen forces that are taking over the world. Be afraid!"
To see Salmon's book as being about storytelling is, in spite of its title, missing the point. It's really about dangerous trends toward manipulation through narrative. If this were well-argued, it would be a valuable addition to the literature about storytelling.
Storytelling deserves better critics. I hope that the coming years produce them.
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3 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Disappointing - Poor Arguments, May 4, 2010
This review is from: Storytelling: Bewitching the Modern Mind (Hardcover)
I was disappointed and found this book to be unpersuasive. The author makes statements about broad changes in our society, with few facts or arguments to back them up. For example in one passage he describes how simply making a purchase at a modern retail store is an act of participation in a narrative, but he never explains how or if this would not have been true 20 (or 200) years ago. I wanted to learn about how institutions and politicians are manipulating the hard-wiring of the human brain and using stories to get what they want; instead the book provides lots of anecdotes (heh) and heavy borrowing from others to demonstrate that everyone's talking about storytelling these days. He seemed to have few concrete statements of its own, and looked like the author simply lexus-nexus searched for the word "storytelling" and provided citations for every instance he could find.
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1.0 out of 5 stars
Poorly written, July 7, 2010
This review is from: Storytelling: Bewitching the Modern Mind (Hardcover)
After reading Doug's review, I gathered that Mr. Salmon had written an attack on storytelling. I purchased the book anyway, because Doug's negative review made the book sound perversely interesting. Sadly, the book is so poorly written it is difficult to understand what point the author is trying to make.
Since Mr. Salmon takes issue with the current use of storytelling, I would assume that when he wrote this book he made a point of NOT telling a good story. I understand this. However, he has also failed to make a clear argument. The essence of a clear argument is that an author clearly and succinctly states a claim, then sets out reasons that support the claim. Mr. Salmon is so full of scorn for the current use of storytelling, much of his book is a compilation of brief quotes from other authors' negative views. But he fails to tell a good story and he fails to make a clear argument.
If I can parse some sense out of his scrambled prose, I gather Mr. Salmon is making a case against the misuse of storytelling by corporations, advertisers and politicians to mislead and deceive the public. If this is what he is point he is trying to make, I agree with him. Nevertheless, the book is still poorly written. If you want to read a book that makes this point clearly, that explains exactly how narrative is being used to deceive and that makes rational suggestions about an effective response, read George Lakoff's "The Political Mind".
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