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Come on - why don't we write our own book right here in the fiction forum ? I'll do the first sentence, and then jump in....hold on, here we go...


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Initial post: Apr 20, 2012 10:37:54 PM PDT
Ciel 1101 says:
(This is a popular post on Amazon UK. Just thought I'd bring it here)

The dragon soared through the vast expanse of outerspace.......

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 6:53:32 AM PDT
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Posted on Apr 21, 2012 7:06:33 AM PDT
RJT says:
his next sighting, his next encounter after all this time with...

Posted on Apr 21, 2012 8:59:32 AM PDT
out his dragonmate, ever since they saw the big humongous flash of light and the noise erased all of their hearing ability, although some of their eyesight did return after a couple of weeks.

Posted on Apr 21, 2012 10:11:32 AM PDT
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Posted on Apr 21, 2012 10:22:57 AM PDT
RJT says:
his breathing became labored, and flying, soaring, diving, even gliding became a chore almost beyond endurance, yet pushing on in the search for her now was a must, even though he's caught a glimpse of...

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 10:43:23 AM PDT
the enemy. He took a sharp turn, but in an attempt to avoid an encounter he . . .

Posted on Apr 21, 2012 10:53:26 AM PDT
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Posted on Apr 21, 2012 11:05:06 AM PDT
Dragonstark says:
That he had been deceived by his own illusions. A cold shard of a comet had pierced him and the enemy's approach was nigh. He had one method left to him. He quickly dove, engulfing himself in fire, and flew towards the next planet he came across.

Posted on Apr 21, 2012 11:12:16 AM PDT
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In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 11:47:21 AM PDT
Lil devil.
From WIKI: -30- has been traditionally used by journalists to indicate the end of a story. There are many theories about how the usage came into being,[1]e.g. from that number's use in the 92 Code of telegraphic shorthand to signify the end of a transmission in the American Civil War era.[2] In another theory, the "-30-" originated when stories were written in longhand; X marked the end of a sentence, XX the end of a paragraph, and XXX meant the end of a story. The Roman numerals XXX translate to 30.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 11:49:12 AM PDT
was nowhere in sight, the blue planet in front of him looked like a good place to...

Posted on Apr 21, 2012 12:05:50 PM PDT
RJT says:
heal, to think, to plan until he was strong enough again to forge ahead in his search. He needed to look at the blue planet carefully...

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 12:16:23 PM PDT
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In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 12:33:06 PM PDT
Nobody gets to end the story, except the one who started it.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 12:34:46 PM PDT
but he was too ill, he hadn't the strength. He . . . would later thank his mate for saving him from crashing. She . . .

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 12:37:58 PM PDT
He wanted to see the. Sun spots on the dun

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 1:32:03 PM PDT
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Posted on Apr 21, 2012 1:53:03 PM PDT
RJT says:
gently glowing aura really there? As he nears, it grows brighter; is it perhaps the Azul Cave of legend, crystal filled and magical, long lost to all of his kind? If it be so, maybe, just maybe...

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 5:07:13 PM PDT
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In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 5:30:09 PM PDT
Ciel 1101 says:
...the sound of an FN P90, freshly reloaded and aimed at him. A human boy stepped out of the shadows, cautious of the space-dweller...

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 5:32:20 PM PDT
who eyed him curiously. It was the first human he had ever seen. He hoped that the flames that came out of his mouth didn't scare the boy, but he had no other way of greeting him. The boy watched the flames . . .

Posted on Apr 21, 2012 5:46:30 PM PDT
rise and fade with the dragons breath. Still tracking the dragon with his weapon, the boy took a couple of tentative steps forward and started to....

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 21, 2012 5:47:16 PM PDT
Last edited by the author on Apr 21, 2012 5:48:49 PM PDT
Ciel 1101 says:
... watch the fire die out, but withdrew his eyes from the flames.
"iniziare a sparare..." he muttered as ancient memories resurfaced from the confines of his memory bank.
Dax uttered a few words, trying to remember all the languages he learned. He noticed the boy spoke in ancient Italian, a nearly dead language that the Owls of Canary planet used to speak. The boy remained watchful, the moment becoming tense.
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