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In reply to an earlier post on May 1, 2012 10:57:21 AM PDT
I'm on pins and needles myself!

In reply to an earlier post on May 1, 2012 10:42:26 AM PDT
You go, Terri!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bring your twin and Tyler to safety. I have the utmost faith in you. :)

Posted on May 1, 2012 8:40:25 AM PDT
Landing safely astride the creature's back screaming like a banshee, Terri's upraised hands plunged the shaft through the gargoyle, searching blindly for its evil heart.

In reply to an earlier post on May 1, 2012 7:51:33 AM PDT
Lol! You've got that right! :)

In reply to an earlier post on May 1, 2012 12:10:40 AM PDT
Don't toy with us my Queen, you know you love it!

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 11:02:07 PM PDT
Last edited by the author on Apr 30, 2012 11:02:20 PM PDT
Wow! What a story. Thank goodness the theme word was safe!

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 9:20:23 PM PDT
Sirena says:
He placed the gun in his mouth and felt the cold steel against his teeth. Calmly, he pulled the trigger. Nothing. "Darn safety!" Foiled again!

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 9:05:21 PM PDT
That's a good one, Oldog. Such creativity.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 9:04:52 PM PDT
And now a man's life is hanging by a thread in the Opposite's thread. Why are you writer's torturing me?

Posted on Apr 30, 2012 7:59:12 PM PDT
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In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 1:43:53 PM PDT
Now there's two of us Anna, we're creeping up on you!

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 1:33:11 PM PDT
Last edited by the author on Apr 30, 2012 1:34:11 PM PDT
J. Richard~

Nice to see your story. I like it (though it's creepy!)

Edited just to say Dan already mentioned the use of the word safe, so I deleted my message.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 1:11:38 PM PDT
Last edited by the author on Apr 30, 2012 1:25:05 PM PDT
Hahahaha! Loved it Richard. I'm a fan of warped humor so it's a pleasure to meet you.

Btw, you need to use the word 'safe' in submissions posted here. It took me a few days to get on board when I first found the thread. Keep writing Bro!

Btw(2) don't forget to save some bleach for those pesky Witnesses!

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 30, 2012 12:19:59 PM PDT
I cleaned up the scene with bleach. I hear knocking at my door. Just a Jehovahs Witness. I'm gonna be okay.

Posted on Apr 30, 2012 8:22:00 AM PDT
As yellow fangs neared Tyler's throat, a sprinting Terri recklessly launched herself.  Safely clearing the steep embankment she fell, tightly clutching the splintered arrow shaft.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 29, 2012 10:30:08 AM PDT
Last edited by the author on Apr 29, 2012 10:39:08 AM PDT
Hang in there Anna, we're about to make the jump to light speed!!!

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 29, 2012 10:04:45 AM PDT
Oh, Tyler. Don't give up. Surely the author won't let you become dinner for this evil gargoyle. Safety must be yours!

Posted on Apr 29, 2012 9:03:12 AM PDT
Sensing Tyler's limpness the gargoyle relented and grinning wickedly, licked its scaly lips.   Now it could safely gorge itself, first the boy, then, his siblings.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 28, 2012 8:51:41 AM PDT
I fear no evil, for thou art with me! Signed: Tyler.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 28, 2012 8:46:53 AM PDT
Tyler, hang on. Surely this torture can't last. The author couldn't be so cruel as to deny you safety after all you've endured. ;(

Posted on Apr 28, 2012 8:43:45 AM PDT
Tossing knife remnants safely away,  it joyfully began ripping Tyler's arms from their sockets.  Swooning from exhaustion, pain, and the creature's fetid breath, Tyler fainted.

Posted on Apr 27, 2012 8:36:41 AM PDT
Summoning his strength, Tyler bucked like a wild bronco attempting to dislodge the gargoyle.  His only thought, gaining his sisters sufficient time to safely flee.

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 26, 2012 6:58:48 PM PDT
Last edited by the author on Apr 27, 2012 3:03:37 AM PDT
Not to worry my Queen, it's always darkest before the dawn!!!

We're only a little past midnight story-wise. We only need suffer a few more hours of darkness together, then I guarantee we'll bask in the warming rays of a beautiful sunrise!

In reply to an earlier post on Apr 26, 2012 6:11:31 PM PDT
Dan, Dan~

What are you doing to me? My heart is breaking. How can the twins be safe without Tyler? PLEASE LET TYLER LIVE!

Posted on Apr 26, 2012 8:38:14 AM PDT
Last edited by the author on Apr 26, 2012 8:38:54 AM PDT
Knocking him spread-eagled, it safely pinned his arms.  Taloned feet savagely raked Tyler's abdomen as dripping fangs discovered his boot knife, snapping it like kindling.
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