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The Light Between Oceans
The Light Between Oceans
by M. L. Stedman
Edition: Paperback
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Prozac Prose, November 13, 2012
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Talented newcomer M.L. Stedman pens an extremely well-crafted tale of love, life, loss, and redemption. As other reviewers have summarized the plot elsewhere, I won't belabor that but rather point out the author's greatest strength: characterization. Both her protagonists and minor players are thoroughly dissected in autopsy-like detail, revealing their inner guts, motives, strengths, and foibles. It is this emphasis on individual sturm und drang that drives the story: the players' roller-coaster emotional ups and downs are so dramatic that the reader is often left drained and breathless. The characters are relentlessly beaten down and then lifted up, only to fall again in dizzying fashion. This is heart-wrenching story-telling, but it is redeemed in the end in a tear-jerking denouement. If this was Stedman's intent, she skillfully accomplished her goal.

It's hard to fit this work into a genre, but I think of it as Prozac Prose. The book is the most depressing of its kind since the excellent works of Anita Shreve. My only quibble with this tome is its extraordinary bleakness. None of the wounded characters is ever made completely whole again. If this kind of dark, maudlin story is your cup of tea, the work is a must-read. As for me, each time I picked up my Kindle, I had to take an anti-depressant. At one point I was so down that I considered electroshock therapy, but I couldn't fit my finger into the wall socket. So I kept a loaded gun at my side in case I decided to put a bullet through my brain.

Would I buy M.L. Stedman's next work? Probably. Once I get out of the mental hospital.
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One Rough Man: A Pike Logan Thriller
One Rough Man: A Pike Logan Thriller
by Brad Taylor
Edition: Mass Market Paperback
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4.0 out of 5 stars much better than its premise, June 28, 2012
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First, take a fatuous premise -- the construction, by the Mayans centuries ago, of a highly lethal armament still capable of deployment today. Then add the ludicrous contemporary sub-plot of its discovery by hell-bent Islamic fundamentalists intent on using this arm as a weapon of mass destruction against Israel and Western powers, plunging the earth into a religious World War Three. Shake, mix well, and you have the elements of a preposterous yarn the reader will discard after the first ten ten pages, no?

Not so. Former Special Forces officer Brad Taylor uses his considerable talents to meld the elements into a fast-moving, compelling, military-style thriller that keeps the pages turning faster than the countless bullets that continuously fly through the air. In addition to non-stop action, Taylor gives us sympathetic protagonists whose depressing back-stories set them up for redemption. His military background gives considerable authenticity to the tale. Finally, the initially prickly relationship between the male and female main characters slowly morphs into a budding romance.

Taylor is a good, but not great, writer, with repeated and annoying punctuation gaffes. But his talent lies in the finely-tuned storytelling that ultimately turns the incredible into a highly believable, rapid-fire thriller in this genre. Can't wait to read the sequel.

Job well done, sir.


Origin
Origin
by J. A. Konrath
Edition: Paperback
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars Like, I know this creature . . ., June 25, 2012
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Something about this book was disturbingly familiar.

The tale involves the awakening, a century after its discovery, of a seemingly-comatose, government-caged, Satan-like demon. I instinctively knew what it looked and acted like without even reading the first page, because I've been married to its sister for thirty-seven years. As the story progresses, it turns out that the creature isn't a theological player at all, but something even weirder. Suffice it to say that it's a carnivore with an equal preference for humans or whole sheep. And it's, well, really hungry.

Once "Bub," as the thing is nicknamed, escapes its confines, it displays rather unrefined eating habits. Utensils? Never heard of 'em. It bites off huge food hunks, only masticating superficially before spitting out unchewed, fleshy morsels and then burping, reminiscent of my children's inelegant table manners.

While I give author Konrath credit for genre juggling, this schizophrenic story can't decide whether it's primarily thriller, horror, theology, comedy, or romance. In his afterword, Konrath says that in a re-write, he removed many comedic elements. I think this was a mistake, because much of the retained humor was hilarious. And I found the premise behind this book just a little too incredible for my taste. That said, the author is a good writer who establishes empathy with his human characters and keeps the pages turning, which is all I can ever ask from those penning commercial fiction.

Everything considered, well worth the $2.99 Kindle price.
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Stars Fall
Stars Fall
by Stephen Terrell
Edition: Paperback
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars home run for the new guy, May 9, 2012
This review is from: Stars Fall (Paperback)
In this compelling legal thriller, newcomer Stephen Terrell, a practicing attorney, uses his courtroom knowledge to add authenticity to the plot. We are barely into the book when recent law school graduate Matt Demaree, finding himself in the wrong place at the wrong time, becomes the fall guy in a bungled double murder based on fraud, greed, and Old Boy Southern corruption. The story rockets along at a lightning clip with Matt always just managing to stay one step ahead of his pursuers. The protagonists are sympathetic and the action non-stop.

Move over, John Grisham: there's a new gun in town, and his name is Stephen Terrell.
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One Blood: A Sergeant Kella and Sister Conchita Mystery (Sister Conchita and Sergeant Kella)
One Blood: A Sergeant Kella and Sister Conchita Mystery (Sister Conchita and Sergeant Kella)
by Graeme Kent
Edition: Hardcover
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars South Pacific meets Columbo, April 22, 2012
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For me, successful fiction is either character-driven or plot-driven. Truly great fiction writers (think John Irving) combine the best elements of both. In this first book I've read in the Sergeant Kella/Sister Conchita series, Author Graeme Kent skillfully concentrates on the character factor, sometimes at the expense of the story line. His protagonists are muscular, sympathetic, and sufficiently fleshed-out to create maximum likability. Solomon Islander Kella is a former rugby player not loathe to use his fists, while Sister Conchita is an outspoken young nun with an eye toward police procedural matters. The two work well together and there is a soupcon of romantic chemistry, but author Kent prefers not to tread in that direction.

The plot, delineated by other reviewers above, is rather thin. Though hardly compelling, there is enough of a story line to just barely hold the pages together. This lack of page-turning quality made me put the work down numerous times, but I kept returning for Kent's strength: how the characters played out. Kent is a superb writer with superior auctorial skills, and this prompted my 4-star rating. For readers who value good writing over mediocre plotting, this book is worth picking up.
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The Walk
The Walk
by Lee Goldberg
Edition: Paperback
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars disaster with a twist, March 24, 2012
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In this clever work, Lee Goldberg creates an interesting twist to the typical post-apocalyptic novel. The story plays out in and around Los Angeles immediately after "The Big One ," an earthquake that destroys much of the city. But rather than dwelling on fictitious superheroes, the plot revolves around an all-too-ordinary dweeb named Martin Slack, a screenplay reviewer and failed writer trying to walk home through the ruins of L.A. The story is a bildungsroman in which the insecure, ego-inferior Martin, through his struggles, ultimately discovers who he really is and what he stands for, constantly challenged by a picaresque -- if imaginary -- tough-guy alter ego named Buck. (Psychologically, the book reveals a great deal about how Goldberg views himself.) Along the way, the author throws barbs at his contemporaries, pungently lampooning the human foibles of those in the entertainment industry. This short novel is part satire, part action drama, but always absorbing. A fast, entirely enjoyable read.
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Eyes of the Hammer
Eyes of the Hammer
by Bob Mayer
Edition: Paperback
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1 of 2 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars a credible military thriller, March 16, 2012
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How I negotiate Amazon's star trek:

5 stars -- one of the best books I've ever read.
4 stars -- a good/very good book of its kind.
3 stars -- not good, not bad: just meh. Lukewarm. A coin toss.
2 stars -- while the work may have some redeeming qualities in writing or plot, it's generally trash bin filler.
1 star -- before I request a refund, pass the emesis basin.

Mayer is a prodigious writer, having produced over 45 works. These days, most military thrillers touch upon Middle Eastern terrorism; but "Eyes Of The Hammer" was penned a decade before 9/11, thus narrowing the author's potential subject matter. He chose Special Forces vs. Columbian drug carters -- done by others, true, but Mayer imbues the topic with distinctive flair. His characters are well-drawn and sympathetic, albeit endowed with a dollop of superhero. There's even a tasteful element of budding romance. My only quibble is that the first third of the book, like many girls I dated in my callow youth, all talk and no action. But the author quickly remedies this and soon keeps the elbows and projectiles flying. Everything considered, for military thriller devotees, a worthy read.
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Fifty Shades of Grey
Fifty Shades of Grey
by E. L. James
Edition: Paperback
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10,747 of 11,457 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars An older man on truckling, March 7, 2012
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First, a disclaimer. I am a male senior citizen, a semi-retired gynecologist whose customary literary fare is spy novels and military techno-thrillers. I have never read a romance before, except perhaps for junior high's "A Tale of Two Cities" (or was that a classic?) But after the recent hullabaloo over James' "Fifty Shades," I opted to give the genre a glance.

The book's protagonist is college student Anastasia, who has never had sex or even "touched herself." I had to suspend disbelief at the social and sexual naivete of this twenty-one year-old, but I guess this implied vulnerability makes her more attractive as a romantic heroine. Yet it doesn't take her long to rectify this situation, and soon she is having orgasm after orgasm at the behest of her "dominant" partner, Mr. Grey. At my age, my arthritis flared up just reading about Ana's sexual gymnastics. And for some reason, I kept thinking about her contracting genital warts. Soon, however, Ana's endless pyrotechnic climaxes resembled repetitively watching porn: after a while, it leaves me bored and yawning. That said, there was a definite infectiousness to the plot; and taking Viagra to stiffen my resolve, I persevered.

James' strong suit is her ability to elicit sympathy in the protagonist. I wanted to find out what happened to Anastasia, and that lent the story a compelling, page-turning quality. James is a polished novelist. Her dialogue is crisp, her prose poised, and her paragraphs well-parsed. The author's considerable skills notwithstanding, would I pick up an erotic romance like this again? Probably not.

But that's just me.
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Black Flagged
Black Flagged
by Steven Konkoly
Edition: Paperback
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53 of 60 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars Interesting, but oh, that grammar . . ., February 22, 2012
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In this engaging spy thriller, action abounds and the pages turn swiftly. This is my favorite genre, and I always look forward to a new author who lets the knives thrust and the bullets zing. From that standpoint, the book didn't disappoint. I did have some quibbles, however. The plot is convoluted and not fully revealed until midway through the book. The character list is lengthy, requiring a scorecard to keep track of the players. Unfortunately, the characterization is superficial, and none of the characters is fleshed out enough to make the reader really care or sympathize. Somewhat worse is the author's annoying habit, at least once per paragraph, of plunking down a comma where none is needed. Apparently he never met a conjunction he didn't like, because he precedes most "ands" with a comma, even before incomplete clauses. For a grammar wonk like me, I had to park my gag reflex at the front cover. But if you can get past the grammatical solecisms, the work is a fast read.
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First to Kill
First to Kill
by Andrew Peterson
Edition: Mass Market Paperback
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29 of 43 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars If grammatical errors could kill . . ., January 27, 2012
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In this rather slow-paced military-style thriller, the plot is superficial, though the characters have reasonable depth. I could not suspend enough disbelief, however, to find them sympathetic or at all compelling. I found enough here to ordinarily rate the work a minimal thumbs-up, were it not for the execrable grammar, punctuation, and hanging participles. There are enough run-on sentences for this to serve as a "how not-to" book. This is not all the author's fault, of course. What ever happened to editors and proof readers? Have they gone by the wayside in e-books? If you want to give the new kid on the block a go, take a chance on this work. But if, like me, you have a thing for sucky syntax, rate this one a pass.
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