1 of 3 people found the following review helpful
I gave this a shot because I want to support indie authors, and I managed to read as far as chapter 8. I may try to finish it, but it's unlikely considering that there are other, better books in my reading list.
The viewpoint shifts constantly. There are grammatical errors everywhere. Characterization is competent, but it's ruined by the messy view changes and it's close to impossible to get a handle on each one - they all blur together, and there are no differences in voice to help distinguish who's who.
There was too much convenience. They just happen to find a spellbook in an old bookstore, and the character that casts the spell that dumps them into the fantasy… Read more