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1.0 out of 5 stars Waste of time, December 27, 2012
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This review is from: Sungudogo (Kindle Edition)
Pros: Intriguing story

Cons: Appalling writing, terrible grammar, atrocious story telling.

I cannot believe that this is getting 'honest' 5* reviews. As an extremely avid reader I have encountered some fairly poorly written books in my time - even a self-published one written by a 13 year old.

Laden's takes the cake.

You'd expect a bit more from an adult, and particularly from a learned professor.

The characters were generic and wooden, the prose was child-like, and the descriptions left more than a lot to be desired. Rarely am I incensed enough to write a review, but this was worth warning people about.

I'm not being mean and giving it only 1* because this type of book was not for me, I've read Twilight (a series that I despise) and considered it at least 3* due to its readability and story. The only explanation I can think of for the glowing reviews are that: a) It's an acquired taste, b) Some people can see past the weak prose, c) They are written by his supportive friends/influenced by the appeal to charity.
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