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2.0 out of 5 stars Interesting Story, but the Dialogue is Laughable!, June 2, 2011
This review is from: Fatal Affair: Book One of The Fatal Series (Kindle Edition)
If I have to read the phrase, "...the heat in his eyes" or, "her eyes were hot with desire" one more time, I will scream! Fatal Affair has an interesting, engaging-enough plot, but some of the lines by these characters come straight out of a cheesy Lifetime movie. I found myself rolling my eyes every 5 minutes and sighing with exasperation every time the phrase "heated eyes" or some variation of it showed up. And believe me - it's literally Every. Single. Chapter. I purchased this book based on the stellar reviews - without knowing anything about Marie Force or her books. My expectations were waaaay up. I can't say I hated it, but the dialogue drove me crazy enough to write this review.
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