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3.0 out of 5 stars Ok, November 26, 2011
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This review is from: H.E.R.O. - Metamorphosis (Kindle Edition)
I read this book and based on the other review I can definitely say this was not well written. This is not to say it was a terrible book but lets just call it campy.
Campy in being that at the start of each chapter there is a narration describing whether this is pov or which of the 3 protagonist point of view we well be reading from.
Campy in that the good guys :) are clearly identified as wholesome desired specimens of human stock with the best in moral and somewhat ethical qualities. While the bad guys are monsters of the worst variety with no redeeming qualities.
A good book should flow transitioning from character to character and advance the plot line. This switching pov for each chapter made it disjointed. Speak of flow there are 1 or 2 chapters which could have been left out as it only drew out the book while repeating factoids about the character.
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