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Sweet Story, Lacking Execution,
This review is from: The One and Only Ivan (Hardcover)
Customer review from the Amazon Vine Program (What's this?)I liked the story. It was sweet and sentimental. A very touching story of a gorilla who saves a baby elephant. The set up was clever. An entire story told by a gorilla narrator. Very smart thinking there. However, something was missing in the actual execution. It just felt choppy and incomplete. It didn't feel genuine. There was also a large portion of the book that was just chatter, having little to do with the story. (The book also contains a glossary, which is completely overkill, since each term in the glossary is defined as it is used. A cast of characters would have been more appropriate, or a map of the mall.) The beginning was very slow moving, which is never a good thing in a children's book. Once it got to the actual story (about 68 pages in) the story moves you through the choppiness and sometimes meaningless chatter.
This book makes a much better read aloud book than a read it yourself book. Read aloud, the choppiness doesn't seem so apparent and the slow moving story can be pressed through.