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6 of 6 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars Not close enough to the editor, September 11, 2011
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This review is from: Too Near The Edge (Cleo Sims Mysteries Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
I might be the odd person out, but I did not enjoy this book. I had to force myself to finish the story.
I didn't understand why it was a Cleo and Tyler Mystery ~ Tyler wasn't part of the story other than to appear and not offer anything. A spirit guide should guide if that is what he is.
There was a lot of focus on food, drink and clothes~ time would have been better served being less concerned about menu and more concerned about unique characters. At this time I don't see how there could be a series following because they don't stand out enough to draw a person in.

I did finish the book, but I felt as if it was a story by a high school student opposed to a published author and I want a bit more out of a book than that ~ regardless the price.
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