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Maui Heat Will Leave You In The Cold,
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Even for a Naughty Nooner short Maui Heat is tedious, mainly because Ms. Thatcher attempts to make it into an actual story. Unfortunately her attempt to tell a story is negated by the fact that the story she tries to tell is not at all interesting. Just as the get it on is coming Gabe is pulled away to break up a fight somewhere, and Maggie is left all on her own, thinking he will never come back and getting groped be a drunk who seems to have a little more interest in her than her manly stud Gabe.
They finally do get together and alone, and Ms. Thatcher whops out her can of spray cheese to give them a healthy squirt.