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Needs a *lot* of editing,
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This review is from: Before Death (Kindle Edition)
It's blindingly apparent almost immediately that the author is not a native English speaker. The grammar and syntax errors come thick & fast, and required me to think a lot harder to figure out the intended message than was compatible with either suspension of disbelief or enjoyment of a light novel. Like the reviewer before me, I quit very quickly. Life's too short, and I have several dozen other books, presumably intelligibly written, waiting to be read.
Get this edited into easily readable English and I'll try again.
At least I got it free rather than spending $20 + shipping on the dead tree version. I'd have pursued getting a refund for that.
The publisher, XLibris, must be a vanity outfit.