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This review is from: If Errands Could Kill (Minivan Mom Mystery Series) (Kindle Edition)
If the author had had his seven-year-old write this book it would not be surprising. The plot moves fast but to get to it you must wade through horribly illiterate prose. Nearly every page contains an annoying error - think "he could OF" done something or "consulting my CONSCIOUS." Worse than Tom Swifties, it is full of adverbs that have no "ly" - "He did it perfect." Some sentences are so oddly written you have to double back to figure them out. This was a free download on Kindle; not worth the $3.50 now asked for.
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Initial post: May 14, 2012 7:45:19 AM PDT
A Customer says:
Very helpful, those kind of things would drive me nuts too!
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